Tuesday, September 16, 2008
Monthly News from Glimmer Train
Posted by Jane

logo01.jpg Glimmer Train just announced the winners of their July Family Matters competition. All winners will be published in an upcoming issue of Glimmer Train Stories.
 
First place ($1,200)
Nellie Hermann (Brooklyn, NY)
“Can We Let the Baby Go?"
 
Second place ($500)
Stefanie Freele (Healdsburg, CA)
“Us Hungarians”
 
Third place ($300)
Rolf Yngve (Coronado, CA)
“Going Back for His Brother”


A PDF of the top 25 winners can be found here. This quarterly competition is open to all writers for stories about family (word count range is 1,200–12,000). Submissions may be sent for the October Family Matters using the Glimmer Train online submissions system at www.glimmertrain.org.

Also:  Fiction Open contest (deadline soon approaching!  September 30)
Glimmer Train hosts this contest four times a year, and first place is $2,000 plus publication in the journal. It’s open to all writers and all themes, with a word count range of 2,000–20,000. Click here for complete guidelines.
 

If you didn't know, Writer's Digest partnered with Glimmer Train to publish two compilation volumes of the best stuff from their Writers Ask newsletter. Be sure to check them out.
 


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 Tuesday, September 02, 2008
Writer Mama Back-to-School Daily Giveaway
Posted by Jane



Writer's Digest author Christina Katz (our Writer Mama) has a month of giveaways in September to celebrate back to school! You can find the line up of prizes here (which includes goodies from Writer's Digest):

http://thewritermama.wordpress.com/2008/08/28/writer-mama-back-to-school-giveaway-the-2008-final-list-of-prizes/

Participants have to answer writing-career related questions to qualify for the daily drawing. Click here for the full list of rules.

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 Tuesday, August 19, 2008
BEA Pitch Slam Success Story
Posted by Jane

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Just received this news from agent Janet Reid (thanks for pointing out, Chuck!)
Then there was that BEA Writers Digest Pitch Slam conference. I bitched and
moaned and whined so much about going that Chuck forced me, yes FORCED me,
to find a great writer, sign her, and sell her book for six figures. I blame
Chuck entirely for that failure of expectations.
Chuck comments, "She's being sarcastic, of course, but she DID sign a client there and sell her book for six figures."


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 Sunday, August 17, 2008
On the Road: SSU Writers' Workshop (And: Memoir/Storytelling Tips)
Posted by Jane



Today was the final day of the Sacramento State University Writers' Conference; I arrived on Friday and have been meeting with writers and speaking since early on Saturday morning. This afternoon I was off-duty and walked to a nearby Borders (pictured above)—the first time I've walked into a bookstore flanked with palm trees.

But down to business.

Saturday (early morning): Manuscript Critiques
Before the conference, I was sent 20-page manuscript samples from five writers. Four of the five were memoir or life story manuscripts. Let me state right out that memoir is difficult to do well, yet lots of people are attempting it. If you're not a celebrity, then your story has to survive on the art and craft of the writing, or your sharp and unique perspective—no easy feat for a new or inexperienced writer. Of the manuscripts I read, they tended to be:
  • Very raw and personal. This makes it difficult to revise with the requisite distance. Some of the manuscripts I read used excerpts from journals/diaries, which is usually not a good idea if we're talking about producing publishable work.
  • Lacking a story arc. The reader needs to have a reason to keep reading, to feel like they are in the hands of an experienced storyteller. Even the life or the experience seems chaotic and without shape, there needs to be a shape and order on the page.
  • Cathartic. Writing is an excellent way to find or make meaning out of painful and confusing experiences. But such writing isn't necessarily publishable. Personal essay and memoir has to go beyond a cathartic experience (that benefits the writer alone) and give the reader a compelling reason to keep reading.
Saturday (mid-morning): Speed Pitching
I participated in a two-hour pitch session, where writers had three minutes to pitch their projects to editors/agents, one-on-one. Again, I encountered many writers trying to tell their life stories or family stories.

RED FLAG: Memoir & Life Story
I can't begin to tell you how often I hear the following at writer's conferences (and from writers all over the map):
  • "My friends and family love my stories. They said I should write them down."
  • "I wrote this just for my family, but they said it should be a published book."
  • "My [family member] had an amazing life. Her stories deserve to be written and published so they're not lost forever."
What I'm about to say may appear cold, unfeeling, or downright mean, but:
OK: Your life stories or family stories are unique and deserve to be shared. But do they deserve book publication? Or, more importantly, do you have the talent to tell these stories through the written word so that they do deserve book publication?
Everyone forgets that writing is a craft that takes years of dedication and practice to become skilled at. If you haven't been practicing the craft for years, there is little chance that your initial efforts to write your life story or memoir will be publishable, and even then, only with an incredible amount of hard work and revision.

The same is true for fiction writers, of course. Very few novelists ever publish their first manuscript. Or second. Or third. Or fourth. It takes time before you get good—in any genre.

The truth is: You could have the most sensational, unusual story ever, or the most boring story ever, but whether it's successful on the page all depends on your skill as a storyteller and as a  writer—and not everyone has this skill. Period.

Friends and family give bad advice. Don't forget that. They may love your stories, but they also love you (presumably!). That's why they're telling you to write and publish.

When I meet discouraged memoirists and personal essayists, I think (unashamedly): Good! It's good that you're getting tired of it, that you're getting frustrated. It means you don't have what it takes, and you need to move onto something else. Book writing and publishing is not a money maker, it is not going to bring you fame and celebrity, and it will not bring in a flood of readers. It will likely disappoint. If you must have something for posterity, self-publish. Or save your money and save your stories in a Word document that you back up on multiple hard drives.

OK. Off soapbox.

Keynote: Dinah Lenney
Now that I've said my piece about aspiring memoirists (apologies to all memoirists!), let me talk about Dinah, who gave the keynote and has a published memoir. Her talk focused primarily on memoir, and it was the best talk I've ever heard on the genre. Generous, honest, funny. Her main point was that memoir is a performance that's driven by your voice or your presence. It's not necessarily the content, but your "cover" of the content. That is: Memoirists "cover" the past, take on the past, riff on the past, filter it and interpret it for an audience. She also had a great quote from Stendhal, "The heart can make anything seem important."

It reminded me of a series on storytelling by Ira Glass. Here's the first in the series. (I may have already referenced this before, but it's worth referencing again.)

My Sessions
For those who would like the PowerPoint presentations from my sessions (as PDFs), here they are!

Many thanks to the board members of the Sac State workshop, particularly Amy Ruddell, Verna Dreisbach, and Bill Pieper. If you'd like to read some blog posts about the conference, visit this site.


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 Monday, August 11, 2008
Another Review of the WDB/BEA Conference
Posted by Jane

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It's a little bit after the fact, but there's a lengthy and well-informed recap of one writer's experience at our 2008 WDB/BEA Writers Conference, from writer Rachel Olivier.

An excerpt:
I looked through the biographies and found one agent who looked promising to me, if not now, at least in the future. There were also a couple of others I was interested in. I sidled into line behind other writers who stood where my “dream” agent’s name appeared at the table nervously reviewing what I might say. The session was going to start at 3 pm sharp. Coordinators had stopwatches and bells at the ready after reiterating the instructions. But there was a glitch and a delay. The agent I was going to pitch to had not come to the conference after all, having taken sick on the plane before it took off. (Yes, she was on the plane, on the runway, when she got violently ill and had to be taken off the plane.) Therefore, we were going to be pitching to her assistant, who was running around making sure the rest of the agents in this, er, agency were settled.
Read the full version over at Mike's Writing Newsletter. (You have to scroll down for it.)


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 Tuesday, August 05, 2008
Recap: Willamette Writers (and My New Philosophy for Pitch Feedback)
Posted by Jane

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I am long overdue in sharing some tidbits from my trip to the Willamette Writers Conference last weekend in Portland (Ore.). Here's an overview.

Lunch talk by author Christina Katz
WD author Christina Katz delivered Friday's excellent lunch talk; for me, her message was very much about how a writer's attitude and perspective can greatly affect success, and emphasized the many wonderful ways that writers have it better than ever (more ways to get information, more ways to network with other writers, more ways to see your book sold and promoted in the world, and so on). Read Christina's recap of the conference (which includes a photo of yours truly).

My talk on The World of Sales
Unlike my previous presentations on this topic that only ran 45–60 minutes, this session was a full 90 minutes. I wondered if I would have enough to say to fill the time, but there were many excellent questions from the audience that helped add valuable discussion, and will certainly inspire some future presentations I give. A few topics that really interested writers:
  • Marketing and publicity efforts by you vs. your publisher. How do you prepare? How do you work with a publicist? Should you hire your own publicist? (The answer is yes.) What does hiring a publicist cost and what can you reasonably expect from a good publicist? FYI: Industry studies have shown that authors who hire publicists do in fact sell more books!
  • How authors can positively affect sell-through numbers. While your publisher may do an excellent job selling your book INTO stores, those books can be returned at any time, for any reason, resulting in a negative number on your royalty statement! So what can authors do to ensure their books sell THROUGH stores into customer's hands? A lot depends on an author's ability to drive traffic to retail outlets to buy books (that is: marketing platform). Think about how you reach readers and how you can grow your direct contact with your readership.
  • How authors can find book sales numbers. Unfortunately, you can't. There is a service, Nielsen Bookscan, that tracks book sales through most trade channels (bookstores), but this service is only available to publishers and other members of a fairly exclusive club. You can, however, check a book's copyright page to see what printing it's in. If it's been reprinted many times and it's not very old/dated, that's a sign of a good-selling book. You can also tell how successful a book is by how many copies a chain bookstore stocks at any given time. The more copies on the shelf, the better it sells.
  • How often do authors earn out their advance? Actually, no one asked this question during the session, but I did get it afterwards, and it's a very popular topic. I see varying statistics in the industry (e.g., as few as 10% of authors earn out), but definitely the large majority of authors do NOT earn out their advance. That means whatever you're paid upfront is all you will ever receive—no royalties!
My New Philosophy for Pitch Feedback
Most of my conference time was spent taking appointments with writers who were interested in pitching a book for F+W Media. For the most part, the pitches were solid, though most people aren't as familiar with the F+W list as I would like (otherwise they would be spinning their concepts in a different way).

After this three-weekend conference extravaganza of pitches and critiques, I've learned something valuable about giving feedback to authors on nonfiction book concepts. Here it is.
  • I know my F+W categories so intimately that as soon as I hear an idea (within 5 seconds), I know if it's viable, at least on the surface. I know if it's a marketable idea given our strengths or market position at F+W.
  • HOWEVER: If I don't think an idea will work, I should NOT respond by saying: "No, that won't work for us" or "That won't sell" (which sparks: "But I know so many people who need this book" or "Everyone tells me this is a great idea" or "I know I could sell it.").
  • Instead, my strategy is this: "Let's discuss what's selling in this category right now." Or: "Let's discuss the audiences that F+W can reach right now and how this book could target them." Or: "If that title were on our list at F+W, it would need to overcome these market challenges."
This accomplishes three very important things:
  1. First, it gives people hope, as well as thoughtful consideration from me, that their idea could potentially work. No one, no matter how professional, wants to hear a "no" five seconds after an idea is uttered. It's kind of like: Let's give love a chance here.
  2. It focuses discussion on the market for the idea rather than the idea itself. This might seem like a small difference, but it's a crucial one. By doing this, no one is saying the idea isn't workable or valuable. We're talking about how the market works, and if there's a big enough market—or if F+W can even reach the intended market. It helps the author think about the project in terms of audience, instead of just their gem of an idea (which they're likely passionate about, and should be!).
  3. Finally, this helps educate the prospective author about F+W, about the category, and what typically works in the market. We all want to be successful, right? No author wants a book to be published that only sells a handful of copies. Plus, a discussion like this, with the right information or examples, usually spark ideas for how the author could spin the topic to make it appropriate for our list.
Finally, keynote speaker Marc Acito rode a bike through Saturday night's banquet! Video below. See his blog post here.


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 Wednesday, July 30, 2008
On the Road: Willamette Writers Conference
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Tomorrow I'm departing for Portland, Oregon, to speak and take appointments at the Willamette Writers Conference. Lots of frenetic energy and familiar faces at Willamette, and I'm very much looking forward to catching up with authors new and old. The WD-related highlights:

My Session: The World of Sales (Or: It's All About the Numbers)
Once again I deliver the facts about how books are sold (and returned) on a national level.

"Never a Better Time to Be a Writer"
WDB author Christina Katz is Friday's lunch speaker! I'm finishing up production on her book for this fall, Get Known Before the Book Deal. She's also presenting "Your Roadmap to the Nonfiction Book Writing Process."

"Writing a Killer Mystery" and "Plotting Crime Fiction"
WDB author Hallie Ephron (Writing & Selling the Mystery Novel) demystifies the art and artifice of mystery writing. Her Killer Mystery workshop is so popular and helpful it's being offered twice during the weekend. She's also participating on a panel that I've seen her organize at other conferences, "Why I Stop Reading," which is not to be missed!

"Toning Your Poetry for Power and Precision"

WDB author Sage Cohen (Writing the Life Poetic, forthcoming in 2009 from WDB) offers tips on poetry revision.

"Getting at the Gold in Your YA Novel"
WDB author Laura Whitcomb (Your First Novel) offers advice in the young adult genre and marketplace. Laura is at work on a second book for WDB, due to release in 2009: Novel Shortcuts: Ten Techniques That Ensure a Great First Draft.

"Fiction's Balancing Act" and "Corpses, Cliffhangers, and Other Remedies for Pacing"
WDB author Jessica Morrell (Between the Lines and the very new Bullies, Bastards, and Bitches) offers her always enlightening and in-depth fiction writing wisdom.

Finally: WD's very own Chuck Sambuchino (editor of Guide to Literary Agents) will be in attendance, delivering manuscript critiques and presenting two workshops, "Everything You Need to Know About Agents" and "Building Your Freelance Portfolio."

Always love to meet people who are reading this blog, so say hello when you see me wandering the halls of the Sheraton in search of coffee, chocolate, or an evening nightcap.

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 Saturday, July 26, 2008
Recap (Day 3): Midwest Writers Workshop
Posted by Jane

It's the third and final day of the Midwest Writers Workshop! It started with the traditional buttonhole breakfast, where each faculty member hosts a table with a specific topic.

My Buttonhole Topic: Online Marketing and Promotion
I spent a couple hours (over some excellent scrambled eggs and coffee, good job BSU catering!) talking about the basics of online author marketing and promotion. The key points that came up again and again:
  • Yes, an author Web site is mandatory if you're publishing a book. At what point does it become critical? When people start to search for you online (e.g., through Google), wanting more information about who you are and what you do. You don't want them to come up empty handed. In some categories/audiences, if you don't exist online, it's like you don't exist at all.
  • A Web site doesn't have to cost you money or be flashy to be effective. How can you figure it out? Go to conferences or writers groups and ask others how they did it.
  • No, you don't have to blog, but if you do, make sure you maintain it and feature something useful to your readership.
  • The time you spend on online marketing/promotion efforts directly relates to who your audience is. For example, if you're a YA author, then you must spend a lot of time being visible online and promoting online. But if you're marketing to a readership that is not Web savvy, then spend less time online (but you're not off the hook—industry professionals and media professionals will still look for you online).
  • Social networking is fun, but not mandatory. I recommend trying it, just to eliminate the fear or ignorance factor. You don't have to continue doing it if it seems unproductive or unfun. If you're trying to reach a younger audience, social networking probably is an essential element of your online marketing.
  • Effective marketing (whether online or offline) is that perfect combination of (1) your strengths (2) your audience's needs and (3) the best fit for your content. This leads to authentic and worthwhile marketing efforts.
The Times They Are A-Changin'
In the afternoon, I talked about how the publishing world is becoming format- and platform-agnostic, meaning it's all about content, and not the vehicle for the content. Furthermore, there can be more lucrative earning opportunities in other forms of media that are personalized and immediate, such as seminars and events. I quoted Seth Godin before, and I'll quote him again: "The book is becoming the souvenir."

Evening Keynote by Jeff Stone
A remarkable and delightful children's author. Highlights from his talk:
  • No. 1 Rule: Have fun. If you don't have fun writing it, no one will have fun reading it.
  • Good idea: Write what you know. Better idea: Write what you want to know.
  • If you're stuck in your story, do something you've always wanted to do (sail a boat, ride a horse, etc).
  • You have to be able to talk about your work and pitch it (condense it).
Finally—I'm Left Speechless
Right before the keynote address, Alan Garinger (from the MWW committee) announced that, in addition to their annual writing awards (Manny Awards & the R. Karl Largent Prize), they were presenting the infrequent and prestigious Dorothy Hamilton Award, which I wasn't familiar with (and I've been attending for six years, so it really is infrequent). As Alan started describing the recipient (a person who had been attending for six years, was a publishing industry insider … well … ) … I am still speechless.




My enormous gratitude to everyone on the MWW committee—Jama, Alan, Ron, Earl, Barb, Charlotte, Cathy, Holly (and I know others I'm missing here, forgive me!)—who are so loving and generous. It's an incredible blessing to be given an award for doing something that I love and cherish immensely. Thank you very, very much. You're all like family.

Postscript (after recovering my faculties!)

Now that I've recovered (a little), here's what I would've said about this very touching gesture. To the MWW committee, to MWW faculty, to MWW attendees (of the past six years): thank you, thank you, thank you. Perhaps you believe you are the lucky ones, but any generosity I've offered at MWW has come back to me a thousandfold. I go every year with an open heart, and I find myself unbelievably enriched upon my return home. Anyone who has attended this event knows what I'm talking about; it has the power to change lives, and I always experience people (writers, faculty, and committee members) who touch me indelibly. Again: Thank you.

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 Friday, July 25, 2008
Recap (Day 2): Midwest Writers Workshop
Posted by Jane

This morning I met with writers for manuscript critiques. The most common problem?

Too much detail and explanation in the opening
That means too much telling and showing. (Do we really need to watch your character move slowly from one place to another, each movement, each gesture, each breath? That's not building momentum. That's usually called boring.) Carefully consider if each detail or action needs to be specifically conveyed. (Is it OK if it is only implied?) Here's a challenge I presented to three different writers: Can you take your first five pages, and condense into 1 page? 1 paragraph? What happens? What stays, what goes? Is it stronger?

A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Midwest Writers Workshop
Bill Fitzhugh delivered the lunch keynote. Highlights of his talk:
  • There are still dry counties in Mississippi.
  • Remember to do the research.
  • It's mostly hard work, but sometimes 10,000 butterflies come in through the window, then they leave. And you work to make that happen again.
In the afternoon, I once again delivered my session on crafting a saleable nonfiction book concept that will attract the attention of agents and editors. (You can go here to download the PowerPoint presentation as PDF file.) If you attended the MWW session and still need the handouts (three pages total), then e-mail me at wdbooks@fwpubs.com, and I'll send them to you as PDF files.


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 Thursday, July 24, 2008
Recap (Day 1): Midwest Writers Workshop
Posted by Jane

This morning I arrived in Muncie, Ind., in time for my lunch talk on "The World of Sales" (or how publishers sell books into stores/retailers and to distributors/wholesalers).

The World of Sales talk
Within the first five minutes, I'd delivered the first hard truth about book publishing (or book sales): all books sold to bookstores are sold on a returnable basis—meaning the books can be returned to the publisher at any time, for any reason. So it's important to distinguish between "sell-in" (how many copies are initially sold into stores) and "sell-through" (how many copies actually sell through the register into readers' hands).

Quick intermission (death-bed advice to writers)
During the introduction of conference faculty, we were each asked to give one piece of advice to writers if it were the last thing we would ever be able to say on the matter. The themes?
  • perseverance (my answer)
  • keep writing, get it done
  • believe in yourself
  • forget the market, write your own book
  • get the words right
How to Get the Most Out of a Writer's Workshop
Author Shirley Jump delivered the evening keynote. She has charming promotional cards that I didn't realize were promotional cards when I first saw them. One one side, it says,
WRITER AT WORK
Do Not Disturb
Note: Will make exceptions for those bearing contracts, chocolates, or margaritas.
On the other side: Picture of Shirley and web site address. Brilliant!

Highlights of her advice:
  • Always be professional. You'll be bumping into agents or editors; you don't where such a meeting will eventually lead. You are interviewing for the job of author.
  • Be extroverted even if not by nature. Talk to everyone you can; you're among like people. Network. You need contacts.
  • Don't sell yourself (pitch to editors/agents) unless you're asked to.
  • Sleep when you get home. Attend everything, go to everything, both formal and informal. (And do the eat-there-stay-there option if available.)
  • Take a day to follow-up after the conference; send thank-yous.
  • Take time afterward to note what excites you most, then act on it.
Tomorrow: a full day of breakout sessions! (Click here to view the MWW schedule.)


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 Wednesday, July 23, 2008
On the Road: Midwest Writers Workshop
Posted by Jane



Tomorrow I will be on the campus of Ball State University (Muncie, Ind.), participating in the Midwest Writers Workshop. I've been speaking at this conference since 2003, and it is very near and dear to my heart (particularly since I come from Indiana and spent a couple years attending high school in Muncie).

On the agenda:
  • Thursday lunch speaker: "The World of Sales" (where I explain how books are sold to chain bookstores, online stores, distributors, wholesalers, and specialty accounts). Followed by informal coffee talk that afternoon.
  • Friday workshop: “Crafting a High Powered and Saleable Nonfiction Book Concept." This is the same one I delivered for the first time in Athens. (See previous post.)
  • Saturday workshop: “The Times, They Are A-Changin'." I discuss how major book and magazine publishers are beginning to recreate themselves into media companies. I help writers make sense of (and navigate) the ongoing transformation of writing and publishing in the digital age.
Lee Lofland, author of WDB's Police Procedure & Investigation, will also be at speaking on topics related to his book (thinking like a detective, understanding police tools and equipment, writing a realistic crime scene, creating compelling villains).

Literary agents will be present, including Anne Hawkins (John Hawkins & Associates), Amy Tipton (FinePrint Literary Management), and Josh Getzler (Writers House).

MWW always offers an excellent program and is known for its very friendly and experienced staff. Look for my in-depth recaps each day, starting tomorrow!


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 Saturday, July 19, 2008
Recap: Harriette Austin Writers Conference
Posted by Jane

I always love journeying to the South for a writing event; aside from getting to hear the regular and charming "Yes, ma'am" near and far, I never have to sigh over yet another ubiquitous conference cheesecake. Here, I get to choose among blackberry cobbler, banana pudding, and apple pie!

But down to business.

Here at Harriette Austin, Saturday was a full day of workshops and one-on-one critiques; unfortunately I didn't have a window to attend other sessions. But I do have a few tips based on my manuscript critiques—I read the first 15 manuscript pages of eight different novels. The same red flags appeared again and again.

Big Red Flags in First 15 Pages
  • No clear protagonist-problem. Of the manuscripts I read, only two had a very clear protagonist with an identifiable problem. For most first-time novelists, this is a requirement for a story beginning. Also, several manuscripts had more than three POV characters in first 15 pages, which can create a dizzying experience for the reader. It's a big risk.
  • Slow start. About half of the manuscripts I read had very slow starts, where the story was mainly taking place in the characters' heads, or it suffered from too much backstory too soon. Resist the temptation to flashback or give a lot of detail about the past; move the story forward instead, and weave in the backstory (only as absolutely required) as you go. I recommend Hooked by Les Edgerton to help refine your first few chapters.
  • In two manuscripts I read, the authors were trying to position their work as fiction, but it was clearly a true-to-life story. In both cases, the authors felt their stories were more marketable or safe if written as novels. Unfortunately, this often creates more problems than it solves.
Crafting a High-Powered Nonfiction Book Concept
Here at Harriette I debuted a new session that focuses on how to develop a killer concept for a nonfiction book (with the exception of memoir). I usually deliver sessions on writing nonfiction book proposals, but I realized these sessions totally missed the big problem that authors have. The key struggle is coming up with a concept that will sell. If the author has evidence that his or her book idea will sell, the proposal practically writes itself.

Click this link to download a PDF of the PowerPoint presentation: NonfictionBk.pdf (894.3 KB)

The Harriette conference features about a dozen different publishing professionals (editors and agents), and takes place in a delightful venue—the University of Georgia Center. They take excellent care of both presenters and attendees, and I highly recommend it to all aspiring writers, especially novelists.


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 Thursday, July 17, 2008
On the Road: Harriette Austin Writers Conference
Posted by Jane

After a somewhat neglectful July here at There Are No Rules, I'll soon be on the road and speaking at the Harriette Austin Writers Conference in Athens, Georgia, this weekend. I'm meeting one-on-one with about ten writers for manuscript evaluations/consultations, then presenting two workshops: crafting an irresistible nonfiction book concept or proposal, and (my personal favorite), why the publishing industry is evil and unfair.

If all goes well in wi-fi land, I hope to offer a daily report. Stay tuned. (And if you'll be at the event, please be sure to find me and say hello.)


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 Monday, June 09, 2008
Don't Go to BEA to Pitch Your Book
Posted by Jane

In an earlier post related to BEA, I mentioned that the show had provided us with a valuable author interaction that eventually led to one of our bestselling backlist titles. That might lead some aspiring writers to think: Well, if I could only get on the BEA show floor, I could sell my book directly to a publisher!

Not so fast.

In the example above we (Writer's Digest) were in pursuit of a particular author. This author did not solicit us on the show floor with a book or a pitch. There's a big (big!) difference.

Aspiring writers (or self-published authors) who go from booth to booth at BEA, trying to find a "distributor" for their book (yeah, right, we all know you're a self-published author looking for a traditional publisher), are universally reviled by exhibiting publishers. Why? Several reasons.

  1. BEA booths are staffed primarily by sales and marketing staff, not editorial staff. Sales and marketing people do not want to hear your pitch.
  2. When editorial staff are present, they are busy (like everyone else) with the their existing authors, with events at the booth, and with other professionals they've made appointments with.
  3. But what about networking, you ask? Isn't it better to make a contact at the show, then follow up later? Well, it depends. I've been pitched countless times at BEA by people I don't know, and my only reaction is irritation, and it doesn't increase my favorability toward that author later, when I'm in the office. I simply think, "Oh that's the person who interrupted me at BEA."
Of course, I don't mind being pitched at BEA by people I already know, or by people who make appointments with me. But drive-by pitches? Don't do it.

Update (6.10.08)
One of our authors, Anastasia Suen, wrote to add:
Great post about networking at BEA! I wrote one last week (with a picture of the pitch slam) saying to pitch your books at the WD conference and to use the BEA exhibits to look at the books to find a match.
http://asuen.wordpress.com/2008/06/06/bea-buzz-networking/
 


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 Wednesday, June 04, 2008
The Other Jane Friedman Speaks Out on BEA's Purpose
Posted by Jane

friedman1.jpg In a Bookseller magazine blog by Gayle Feldman, Harper CEO Jane Friedman is quoted on her opinion of BEA:

"The fact that we've not been able to define what this fair is about after such a long time means we may be coming to the time when definition becomes absolutely essential."

Read the full posting, "Living and Dying in LA."


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Good Advice on How to Pitch
Posted by Jane

The reviews on the BEA/WDB conference are still trickling in … The latest is from an attendee who has excellent advice on how to approach a pitch slam. A snippet:

I think the most successful people were able to boil their book down to these three things:

Genre: I have a middle grade novel about eleven-year-old Billy
Cool factor:  who starts an "anti-bully" business with Smacker, the monster under his bed.
Closing: Smacker disappears and darker creatures arrive under Billy's bed, threatening to destroy the town, Billy's friends, and Smacker, unless Billy can give them what they want--a chance to be on American Idol.

Read the full entry at the blog Wits and Pieces.


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 Tuesday, June 03, 2008
The Big Problem With BEA That Everyone Knows—And Is Starting to Talk About
Posted by Jane

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This year's BookExpo America in Los Angeles was my fifth year in attendance. Every year, I return home exhausted, no matter how long I stay or what agenda I follow. For me, it's an intense concentration of people and experiences—the most intense of the year. Take all the important (and beloved) people you know, along with a bunch of important people you don't know, then shake and stir (e.g., stand in line for 45 minutes for a Starbucks beverage, after standing on your feet for 4-8 hours without sustenance, followed by an end-of-the-day line for shuttle, taxi, dinner, etc).

But I digress.

(Note: For anyone who doesn't yet know the basic texture of BEA, I recommend reading a piece I did for Identity Theory in 2007.)

My company, F+W Publications, has a booth presence at BEA, and I was there on Friday to lend support to my authors who were signing books, as well as meet with a variety of agents and prospective authors (and marketing partners). Unfortunately, in the five years I have been attending BEA, I have yet to see any correlation between a great BEA book signing (or promotion) and great book sales. I wish I could say otherwise, given how much of our staff's energy, talent, and creativity are on display.

If there's a bright side to this, industry-wide people are starting to notice that BEA is a significant expense that looks more and more like a party where we (the publishers—or authors) are the only ones who show up. Take for instance this snippet from AP coverage of the event:
"I think when this is over, we're going to do some soul searching," said CEO David Shanks of Penguin Group (USA). "There are people in this hall who have spent way more than a million dollars at a time when we all should be pinching pennies."
Also, Michael Cader at PublishersLunch reported:
Publishing executives who used to gamely tell us how nice to was to see everyone gathered together and be part of the community even if they couldn't measure the return on investment were talking more this time about the "waste of money" the show has come to represent. One ceo, admitting that "you have to be here," nonetheless said to us, "I don't know what the solution is. People are going to have to take a hard look" at the show and its relevance and value.
In the days leading up to this year's BEA, everyone within the F+W book division was asked to evaluate our participation going forward, considering the expense of attending this show. It appears that, next year, F+W will have a reduced presence at the show, in terms of booth space, staff attendance, author attendance, and other marketing & promotions. It's hard to argue against such a move when our efforts don't translate into definitive sales. Our marketing dollars would likely be more effective in direct-to-consumer events or promotions.

That said, from an editorial perspective, the face time that editors have with authors and agents at BEA has been invaluable for acquisitions. One of my colleagues, Writer's Digest Books executive editor Kelly Nickell, met author James Scott Bell in 2003 on the show floor of BEA. That interaction resulted in a book that has been our No. 1 bestseller for Writer's Digest Books for several years (with sales increasing year on year). Would this project have happened without BEA? I'd argue probably not. One would think this kind of interaction wouldn't be necessary in a world where it's so easy to connect online in seconds, but in fact, I think the reverse has become true. Making time to meet someone face-to-face has become even more treasured and valued. People pay attention when you make that kind of effort.


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 Monday, June 02, 2008
Recap + Photos: 2008 BEA/WDB Writers Conference
Posted by Jane

Now that I'm back in the office, I have a few more things to share from last week's conference in Los Angeles.

FIRST, A FEW PHOTOS
These shots were taken primarily during the break after lunch, during the book signing.

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Robert Brewer, editor of Writer's Market (the guy sitting behind the table), holds down the fort.


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Attendees take a breather to study the agent bios, refine their afternoon pitches, make a few calls, send a few e-mails.


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Here I am (on the right) answering questions at the bookstore.


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A view of downtown Los Angeles from the convention center.


Thanks to attendee Dave Malone for sharing these. If anyone else has photos of the conference to share (and you'd like to see them posted here), please e-mail them to wdbooks@fwpubs.com.


WHAT OTHERS HAD TO SAY


"Oh, my God! This was incredible. As someone who teaches writing, it was both inspirational and affirming to be in the student's seat. Some of what these writers taught, I practice and, in turn, teach to my students and clients. (Yay for me.) And then there's the stuff I didn't know or hadn't thought of or hadn't been exposed to.  We're always learning, no matter what our craft."
—Dawn, an attendee, from her blog Write Well Me

"As the line in front of me got shorter, I kept repeating my pitch, but it kept changing. Should I approach it this way or that way? I had only decided to do this around 2:45pm. At about 3:12 it was my turn. I pitched. It came out lame (I thought), courtesy of my “deer in the headlights” brain freeze, but I brazened it out and went on through it to the end. The assistant and I talked over a couple of points and while I think I can guess why he liked it, I’m still not sure. He liked something about it though, because I was given contact information and told to send him the first 2 chapters."
—an attendee, from her blog My Very Own Blogetary

"The conference went very well. Nay, it went awesome. Attendance was good and the LA Convention Center was very nice. It was more hectic than last year, and I can recall three times during the day when I was in a flat sprint trying to do something."
—GLA editor Chuck Sambuchino, from his GLA blog

"The writers conference in Los Angeles went really well. I'm so glad to have met some of my blog readers there (thanks for introducing yourselves!). The event was successful again for all involved—with happy writers, editors, agents, and even the event organizers, who are notoriously hard to please."
—Writer's Market editor Robert Brewer, from his Poetic Asides blog

"An audience member said that she had read/been advised that her book proposal should include a mention of any personal finances the author planned to use to promote her book, but only if that dollar figure topped $10,000. Her question was: Is this true? The question caught me off guard—mainly because I've never heard this before. While it's definitely smart to provide any information about your self-promotional plans, it doesn't seem wise to place a dollar figure on what you're willing to spend of your own money to promote your work. And it certainly doesn't make sense (to me) to put it in writing."
—WD mag online managing editor, Brian Klems, from his blog Questions & Quandaries

"All I've gotten out of Brian so far is a link to this (admittedly hilarious, delightfully short) You Tube video, Book Launch 2.0. Check it out. And let's hope that Brian at least brings us back T-shirts."
—WD mag editor Maria Schneider, from her blog The Writer's Perspective

AND MY COMMENTS
I am unbelievably grateful to editors Chuck Sambuchino (Guide to Literary Agents), Robert Brewer (Writer's Market), and Lauren Mosko (Writer's Digest Books) for their invaluable contributions in organizing this event. And editor Brian Klems (Writer's Digest magazine) provided much-needed assistance throughout the day and during the pitch slam.

Instrumental F+W staff included Joanne Widmer (mistress of the bookstore), Laura Smith (registration savior), Suzanne Lucas and Kimberly Bolen (register goddesses), Justin Combs and Scott Francis (our muscle men), and last, but certainly not least, Greg Hatfield, my continuing partner in crime.

And of course the conference would not exist were it not for the enthusiastic support and industrious efforts of Mark Dressler, at Reed/BEA.

Finally, I appreciate the generous donation of time and energy from the agents and editors who participated in our pitch slam. Without them, such a successful event would not be possible.

If you attended the conference and would like to voice your compliments or criticisms, feel free to do so here, in the comments field, or send them privately to wdbooks@fwpubs.com

Mark your calendars for next year's conference in New York City, on May 27!


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 Thursday, May 29, 2008
A Successful BEA/WDB Writers Conference 2008
Posted by Jane

Yesterday Writer's Digest Books hosted its annual writing conference in conjunction with BEA. Even though our freight (books & supplies) were late in arriving, we all had a fabulous day.

Pictures soon to follow, along with my commentary. For now, take a look at one attendee's perspective/review of the event, at the 1,000 Cranes Blog.

A small snippet:
The day started with some frank discussions by panelists regarding what literary agents want and how to set yourself apart.  One woman was brutally honest (which I loved) and said "if you are pitching a memoir, really take a hard look at yourself and determine, is this something that a great number of people would want to read?  You can't be a narcissist about this!"
Many thanks to Naomi Takeuchi for taking the time to comment on our event.


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 Tuesday, May 27, 2008
What Is BEA, Anyway?
Posted by Jane

Trying to describe BEA (BookExpo America) to someone outside of the publishing industry can be difficult. Fortunately, there are brilliant people like Michael Cader (of