# Tuesday, April 15, 2008
April PAD Challenge: Day 15
Posted by Robert

Half. Way. There. That's where we're at after you finish today's prompt. Somehow we've made it--huffing and puffing--to the top of the hill and starting tomorrow we'll be running downhill to the finish line. Soooo...let's get to today's prompt, which is a "Two for Tuesday" prompt actually.

Prompt #1: Write an insult poem. There aren't really any rules attached to the insult poem, but it's usually done in good fun. If you write one, you can often open yourself up to a retaliatory insult poem. And that can lead to the equivalent of an insult poetry food fight.

Prompt #2: I've been trying to avoid mentioning it, but today is Tax Day here in the States. So it's time to either file them taxes or file for an extension--or just continue procrastinating, I guess ("Whatever floats your boat," as my father would always say.). Anyway, the second prompt is to write a poem that deals with paying your taxes and/or meeting deadlines.

Here's my poem (predictably associated with the first prompt, since I'm all about verbal food fighting):

 "Smoke and mirrors"

My mama always said,
"If you don't have anything nice to say,
don't say anything at all."
And that's been great advice,
helping me get all the friends I've got,
avoid petty conflicts,
and find a steady happiness through all life's ups and downs--
but let's make one thing clear:
My mama ain't ever met the likes of you;
she ain't ever seen your rain cloud prophesies,
your blame shifting two step,
or your sanded down points that lead nowhere.
You've got answers but no meaning;
you have an image with no identity;
and everyone who doesn't agree with you is wrong.
Here's my advice, boy:
Next time they all gang up on you without giving a fair shake,
save up all your money to buy the largest mirror you can find;
then, use it.

 


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Tuesday, April 15, 2008 3:05:51 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [208] 
Day 6 Highlights
Posted by Robert

On Day 6, I asked you to record the details of your day and write a poem about it. The resulting poems were great. While they may seem "routine" or "ordinary" to you, the rest of us "on the outside looking in" get to read a poem that is either out of the ordinary or something we can definitely relate to our own lives. Thanks for the great writes!

Here are today's highlighted poems.

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A Day in the Life Of

 

Soft sunshine on Frank’s face.

Clock says 8:11—oh no!

Turn on coffee machine.

Kitchen clock says 7:12.

Reset new-fangled clock

(manufactured before Congress

voted in new Daylight Savings times.)

Turquoise-stripped towel on the carpet.

Back exercises. Frank in the dining room

chair sipping coffee. Watching me.

Discuss Chris Vogler’s personal paradigm shifts:

1) Everybody’s gotta be happy=everyone but me.

2) Me first=monster!

3) Me too, but first=balance.

Pray for work for next week.

Pay bills.

Blueberry pancakes, bacon, and strawberries.

Nauseous. Kneel by toilet. Salivate. Spit. (Repeat.)

Almost throw up. What’s wrong? Those triple-action

weight-control pill before breakfast?

Go to church. Hugs. Love. Connection. Sing.

Song of Solomon—dating is the

process by which you observe and evaluate

a person’s character to determine if

they are the right kind—not entertainment.

Albertsons.

Carol-super-sandwiches for lunch.

Central Oregon Songwriters Association

annual awards. Wow! What talent!

Pinto beans and fresh yeast rolls.

Sense and sensibility.

Post this poem.

 

 

Carol Brian |csp2000AT NOSPAMearthlink dot net

 

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Choices

 

I shuffle my way into the kitchen.

I crack an egg,

pour in a teaspoon of wheat germ,

a pinch of salt and pepper,

and whisk the mixture.

I put an English muffin in the toaster.

I pour a dollop of olive oil in the skillet, and

as the turkey bacon and sausage

softly sizzle,

I attack last night's dishes.

One plate has dried pasta sauce on it

and I must use my fingernail to

scratch the red mass off.

 

After we've eaten breakfast,

I walk past the hamper full of laundry.

Upon entering my bedroom,

I stare at the unsorted mail

and the papers that must be shredded.

 

Had my mother come over

I am not sure she'd understand

that the reason for the disarray

was that I had

a poem to write.

 

 

Carla Cherry |cmcmagiconeAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

*****

 

Spring Sunday

 

We slept late, my hand gently

laid across your sore ankle,

your hand tangled in my hair.

You bought pepper plants and

marigold seeds. We pulled weeds.

Read stories aloud to grandhildrem,

corrected rough draft, packed ice chest.

You kissed me before you drove back

to your weekday life. I already miss you.

 

 

Victoria Hendricks |seastarvshAT NOSPAMaol dot com

 

*****

 

sundazed

 

the morning stretched

six cigarettes long

and after weeks

of messages

from you

we meet

13 years later

to eat indian food

and 45

minutes drone

on slowly

then we say good-

bye but don't fall

in love

 

i nap cat-like

on my bed

in a sliver

of sunlight

that chases

the afternoon

across the sheets

and for 3

hours i'm

not obsessing

over my flaws

and why i probably

won't hear

from you again

even as a friend

 

tonight

law and order

marathons

babysit me

between my

escapes

to the backyard

where i count

the stars

winking back

through trees

and the smoke

of an evening

six cigarettes

deep

 

 

k weber |ilovehateyouAT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

*****

 

Sunday the Sixth

 

At 10:30,

I awoke in my hometown

to warmth, open windows,

and bird-songs

drifting upstairs

from the open kitchen door

to my bedroom,

 

then walked down to Main Street

to meet Dad for lunch.

I watched the cars pass

from a tiny park bench,

wondered how so many people

could be driving through

such a small city.

 

I joined the dreary deluge

of carbon and chrome

to come back north.

I stopped to see my man;

he was waiting, cross-legged,

his bright bicycle leaned

against the donut shop.

 

The sun was still shining,

but our shadows were so long

as we pedaled to day's end,

singing songs of spring

and sliding with the wind.

We said goodbye at nine,

and another week began.

 

 

Callan Bignoli-Zale |shehadausernameAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

*****

 

SUNDAY, THE DAY OF REST?

 

Sunday was meant as a day of rest, that’s what I’ve always heard

But when I think of the average mom, that statement seems absurd

Now since I am a grandmother, this day seems harder still

For now I have five grandchildren that go to church with us as well.

Today I got up early just barely half past six

I wanted to sleep in awhile but I knew I had to fix

Breakfast for my little gang, no small endeavor by far,

“I want some cereal,” “Well I want oats” “There’s no jelly in this jar.”

“Is soy milk all that we have left” “When did you get this bread”

I finally get one child in the tub, while another sneaks back to bed.

“Nanny can you find my shoes” “I lost my underwear”

“The zipper is busted in these pants.” “Where’s the ribbon for my hair.”

“Honey, can you iron my shirt? It’s almost time to leave.

Can’t you try to speed things up? Hey, you forgot to iron this sleeve.”

I finally make it to my room, and there’s a runner in my hose

A rapid knock, says, “hurry up” “Can I please put on my clothes?”

At last we make it to the church, a mere ten minutes late

And though I feel all tense inside I try to seem quite sedate.

But then I look at my little crew, and my heart is filled with pride

And I know that I am blessed of God to have them at my side.

 

 

Bonnie |bcholbrook05AT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

*****

 

But You're Not Here

 

I rose not at the crack of dawn

but at the static just off station

of the radio on your side of the bed

where I now lie.

 

I rattling around in the kitchen,

putting something on for lunch,

brewing three cups of coffee

just for me.

 

I would have made more

but you're not here.

 

I grab a quick shower then stare

into the closet for something warm

but not quite wintry.

 

Any other day I'd crawl back

into bed for five more minutes,

just a quick snuggle.

 

Maybe I would

but you're not here.

 

At church I slide into our pew

Leaving room for you--a habit's

hard to break. I'm ready

 

if anyone asks

why you're not here.

 

I grab a bite; what I eat

can hardly be called a meal,

just a few bites taken standing up.

 

Then dragging in the never-empty

well-traveled bag of student papers

from the trunk of the car.

 

I lug it to the couch, spread out

the folders, rubrics, find a pen

under the cushion where I sit.

 

Then I spread the Sunday paper

right on top, read what's new in

Arts and Books. You'd tell me not to

 

Work the LA Times crossword puzzle

in pen--if you were here.

 

Even procrastination fails

as the clock chimes slowly,

needing to be sound--

 

Something you would do.

But you're not here.

 

At least a dozen phone calls,

one wrong number, no one here

by that name, and no call from you.

 

The Sunday evening blues slide

in my windows underneat the doorjamb.

Friday evening's promise not quite met.

 

I move from my place to yours,

leaning back in the chair that bears

the imprint of your body.

 

I feel its chill

since you're not here.

 

Finally back to bed, not quite

to sleep, piles of unread books

and papers scattered on the covers.

 

I slip undercovers on your side of the bed

Since you're not here.

 

 

Nancy |nposeyAT NOSPAMembarqmail dot com

 

*****

 

Toddler Science

 

he insists that the trees

make the wind, imagining, perhaps

tiny pursed mouths exhaling on each leaf

great trunkfuls of waiting air pushed

out by rhythmically beating branches

the trees: Earth’s respiration

 

he says that the bird’s nest

visible from his bedroom window

is full of eggs we should take and eat for breakfast

and also full of baby birds that will soon fly

but the eggs have nothing

to do with these baby birds

eggs are eggs and birds, of course, are birds

 

he contends that reading is impossible

without speech, reminds me disdainfully

that you have to say the words

to read, that word and sound

are inexorably bound

 

 

tria

 

*****

 

Two Days After the Dentist

 

Before I even got out of bed,

I took Darvocet on an empty stomach.

Stupid.

Dizzy and queasy all morning,

I spent the afternoon munching tiny bites

of mac and cheese and watching NASCAR,

ate my third Wendy's frosty--chocolate--

and dreamt of meat.

Sarah |MusicToKnitToAT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

I wake up before him, quickly switching

off the alarm. I make him breakfast, thankful

for the microwave oven at 4am. Getting him

up, ironing his clothes, pushing him out

the door; each day begins pretty much the

 

same. I try to do some housework, usually

surrendering to the TV at some point. I write

poetry, prose, emails. Having dinner ready

when he gets home from work, so he can

quickly eat, grab his books, and head to

class. A typical Monday since I lost my job

 

 

Susan M. Bell |maylandwritersAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

*****

 

Back in DC

 

I woke up alone again with a bloody

nose on a fold-out couch

to the sounds of NASCAR.

After I showered, we drove

to see the cherry blossoms in bloom.

We parked near the Capitol

and walked the length of the Mall,

my Mall (I hadn’t been gone so long)

with my museums and my trees

and my sculptures and grass and life.

In the sunshine, we wandered

around the Tidal Basin, snapping

pictures with the other tourists.

Sometimes, we’d catch a whiff

of the flowers on the breeze

and sniff like dogs to find it again.

We walked back through the city,

down Penn,

and I found my buildings

there, warm but still imposing.

That night, we barbequed hot dogs

and hamburgers in Alexandria,

and I hugged all my old friends

and tried my best

to welcome

their new ones.

 

 

JL Smither |jlsmitherAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

*****

 

Sunday Afternoon

 

Even after the bitter

words of morning, he

canceled his plans

and drove back to me,

just so I could leave

him. Again. He put

away shotguns and shells

then opened the hood to

see what made the "check

engine light" ignite

before I made it to the

end of our road. Me busy

transferring bags and

books from one vehicle

to another, then dumping

dog paraphernalia back

inside. A brief kiss,

a serious look, and "I'm

sorry to ruin you day."

"It happens. Drive safe.

Call me when you get there."

 

 

A.C. Leming |fackorfAT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

*****

 

Working Out

 

Today

I read essays online

with a lavender clay mask drying on,

my lips slathered in a balm of

the labor of bees and lemons

and herbs tweaked, symphonic,

eat your heart out, Estee Lauder:

here in my nightgown, in the living room,

listening to the conspiracy channel,

with truffles and green tea by my side,

I am happy as a sunflower

living through my computer,

making a living, diva-nerd, a library mule.

 

 

Maria Jacketti |medusashairdresserAT NOSPAMmsn dot com

 


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# Monday, April 14, 2008
April PAD Challenge: Day 14
Posted by Robert

Even before some of the comments left yesterday, I've noticed there is a community forming with this April PAD Challenge. Many of you have thanked me, but you should really be thanking yourselves.

A community is only as strong as those who are a part of it. Many of you have posted every single day and left encouraging words and praise for your fellow poets. I'm not doing that; you are; and I'm very proud of you all.

Personally, I think it would be a wasted opportunity--for all of us--to assign writing poetry regularly to one month out of the year. So I'm going to check into a few different options to keep our group together beyond April. There are already some great ideas in yesterday's comments--plus, I've had a few rolling around in my head. So together, I'm sure we'll come up with something amazing. More on this soon, but I know you're all ready to get Monday started off right with today's prompt.

*****

So, today's prompt is actually inspired by a song I love by Feist. The song is called "How My Heart Behaves," and the prompt for today is to write a poem with the title "How (fill in the blank) behaves"--with the poem inspired by whatever you put in that blank. For instance, you could have a poem titled "How Mr. T's mohawk behaves" or "How the homeless man on 9th Street behaves." Have fun with this one (I know you will).

Here's my poem for the day:

"How the playground of my mind behaves"

The girls are full of worry
beside the teeter
                        totter
afraid that Billy won't be stopping by.

And the boys are playing football
as the teachers fret and fuss:
Are there going to be any broken bones today?

Behind them, the bully
does his daily milk money shake down
and punches his sidekick in the arm.

There's a co-ed game of 4-square,
some girls with their jumping rope,
and boys wanting to hang from the monkey bars.

Beneath the hot metal slide
no one rides in summer,
Billy sits kissing his favorite girl
until the bell sounds for them all to go inside.

 


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Day 5 Highlights
Posted by Robert

Day 5's prompt was sent via a cranky PC in an arcade in a little mall in Gatlinburg, Tennessee. It cost me $3 for 30 minutes of access. So, I pounded out my prompt and poem in record time--and a bit later in the day than I would've preferred. However, everyone came together and posted some really great "worry" poems. In fact, I have a few new phobias as a result. :)

Here are some of the poems that stood out for me with this prompt.

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Spiders

 

Spiders hide themselves

in silent spots deep

within the closet,

beneath the bed,

between the window

and the screen.

 

Spiders know

when you are asleep:

They are drawn

from their nests

by the sweet sound of a

little boy’s gentle breath.

 

They’re in the light

fixture above your head.

They guard the bathroom,

waiting for that midnight

visit made on your soft

bare feet in the dark.

 

Good little boys have

rooms free of spiders

and midnight venom.

Were you a good

little boy today?

I think not.

 

 

Elizabeth Keggi |lilyclarissaAT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

*****

 

Decade

 

My ten-year-old Weimeraner,

the one whose leg may be broken,

who sports yet another set of stitches,

I fear the day I will have to hold her

 

muzzel close as she struggles

for air. I shy from the day I will see

her deep keel still, her eyes haze, her

tail cease to move, her paws lie still.

 

I avoid the thought of where she

will lay down for the last time, or

where I will spread her ashes, or upon

which mantle I will keep her urn. I look

 

into her yellow eyes and vow to spend

more time tossing the ball, scratching her

ears, rubbing her near hairless belly. I know

that I will forget that silent promise until the

 

next medical emergency will remind

me that she was 69 on her last birthday.

 

 

A.C. Leming |fackorfAT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

*****

 

Always a Mom

 

They’ve been grown

and on their own

for nearly a decade.

From two hundred miles away

I wonder whether they’re

eating right, sleeping well,

getting designated drivers

on party nights.

On the phone I ask

do they have enough money,

are their jobs going well,

have they been to

the dentist lately?

I imagine they roll their eyes

the way I did at thirty

at the same questions.

 

 

Renee Goularte |share2learnAT NOSPAMsbcglobal dot net

 

*****

 

Worry

 

A song.

An overheard word or two.

When my wife is late from the store.

A late snow storm.

Frostburned flowers.

Arriving late.

My father.

Being chosen last.

Being chosen first.

Reading my poems out loud.

My peers, whoever they may be.

A burning smell when I'm driving.

All three of my sons.

 

 

Justin Evans |evjustinAT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

*****

 

At One With Nature

 

Back home, on the farm,

I clean mouse droppings

out of the cupboards.

 

The following day,

after a drenching rain,

I find the first ant.

 

Long ago, barefooted

on the way to the toilet

one night, I crushed a fat roach.

 

The moths are in the closet,

caterpillars on the curtains,

spiders in every corner.

 

In bed, at night,

I hear the scratchings

rustlings in the walls.

 

Only a matter of time

and mother nature will

take this place back

she, its rightful owner.

 

 

Beth |womenswritesAT NOSPAMinbox dot com

 

*****

 

Monday morning before the garbage truck comes

 

and the mockingbird sings,

I lay in the too-warm room,

your breath a steady,

irritating reminder

of nirvanic slumber

that eludes me.

 

Instead, my head

waltzes, thoughts

baraging my brain

like so much clutter

the whirring truck

will soon pick up -

the library books,

 

no bread for lunches,

and what's for dinner anyway?

The client meeting,

and calls for freezing rain

to snarl the overlong commute.

Forgotten birthdays

 

and unpaid bills,

the perfume on his collar

(not mine) slide into static,

white noise to accompany

tomorrow's appointment

with the radiologist.

 

 

Linda |drwasyAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

*****

 

I'm worried

 

that talentless American directors

will be permitted to keep producing

rotten remakes of Japanese horror movies,

 

that someday the religious right

will succeed in sending a man

to the White House,

 

that society won't collapse

before I have to join "the work force,"

 

that the West Coast will be as dead

and depressing as this state's always been,

 

that a random psychopath

might see me riding on Route 5

and decide to hunt me down in his pickup

then rape, kill, and discard me

before rolling off with my precious bike,

 

that the fluorescent stars I taped to my ceiling

won't come off when it's time to move out,

 

that I complain too much

or dream or drive too much

or eat too much suspicious slime

at all these Chinese buffets -

 

but above all that I'm worried

I'll just run out of things to say.

 

 

Callan Bignoli-Zale |shehadausernameAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

*****

 

Lump

 

The doctor said there’s nothing to worry about

“But let’s keep an eye on it.”

 

How do you keep an eye on something

that cannot be seen but is felt

fingertips probing gently so as not to awaken

the beast that may lie within?

 

How do you not worry when every shower

reminds fingers soaped and slippery

of a presence that is not meant to be there

and may someday stir to be removed?

 

How do you not check more than monthly

for any changes that might occur

until one day the mirror shows you what

fingertips already saw and now eyes see?

 

How do you keep the fingers from

overshaking onto the wrong digit

as you dial to make an appointment

with a person who told you not to worry.

 

 

satia |satia62AT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

*****

 

The Progression

 

I cannot leave the house today,

for if I do, I might trip

over the welcome mat

and break my foot.

That would require a visit

to the emergency room

and probably a cast,

not to mention a needle

for the I.V., (I’m breaking out

in hives just thinking about it!)

and I won’t make it to work.

The eventual ramification

of my fall

will be the loss of my job,

followed closely by car,

house and sanity.

How much safer to remain

in the pillow-topped kingdom—

warm, settled and moments

from dreamland—than to risk

stepping out the front door.

 

Call my boss,

tell her I’m sick

with worry.

 

 

Sara Diane Doyle |saras dot sojournsAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

*****

 

To Sleep, Perchance to Worry

 

I just know the salmon

I ate for dinner

Had gone bad.

But I ate it anyway.

And if I go to sleep now,

I'll be up in two hours

Singing Technicolor lullabies

Into the commode.

If I survive the salmon,

And manage to get to sleep,

The phone will ring

At 11:22 p.m. again.

It will be that brusque guy

Calling from India,

Offering to wave the fee

On my monthly VISA bill

If I pay now.

I keep telling him,

The fee I can afford.

It's the payment

I'm a little short on.

Really, it doesn’t matter.

If I sleep, I’ll just have

That dream again:

The one where the

Chimpanzee wearing

A red and yellow swimsuit

Chases me through my

Home trying to feed

Me a pepperoni pizza.

Maybe I should eat

Something before

I try to sleep.

I wonder if there’s

Any salmon left?

 

 

Mike Barzacchini |mjbarzAT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

*****

 

Animal Anxiety Dreams

 

I worry in my dreams. Some people have anxiety dreams about being naked in front of the class, or performing in a play having forgotten the lines, but I have anxiety dreams about pets. I’ve dreamed disaster for every dog I’ve ever had. My Pembroke Welsh Corgi falls off a cliff, runs out into traffic, is lost in the neighborhood after dark (she’s small enough to make some coyote a tasty meal). I bet the queen never has dreams like this. My Siberian husky broke her chain and it is now wrapped around a tree deep in the woods where she will probably starve to death before I can find her. It is always my fault. When I got myself two fish tanks filled with tropical fish I thought my animal anxiety dream days were over…who can feel guilty about fish? Oh no, even Steven King couldn’t do better than my fish tank dreams. I’ve dreamed about that third tank I forgot I had, the one I never remembered to clean, the fish I neglected to feed. What is growing in the algae at the bottom of the tank? What is floating in the water when I take the lid off? And what about that tank so big it filled the whole wall, the one that I kept a walk-in freezer just for fish food? What kind of fish grows that big and what might it eat? And when the tank shatters, what kind of fishy dream monster flaps around in the glass shards, gasping for air?

 

 

Kate |kberne50AT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

*****

 

Make Your Worries Count

 

Some folks worry night and day.

I hear them rant and yelp.

But after all is said and done,

Their worries rarely help.

 

As for me, I’ve only two:

Not finding words that rhyme.

And, yes, I’d like to rid the world

Of Daylight Savings Time.

 

 

Bill Kirk |RnBKirkAT NOSPAMaol dot com

 

*****

 

My Grandmother’s Worries

 

My grandmother

worried about

going barefoot

in months without r’s,

whether grandfather

approved her

new hat,

children without

sweaters,

men without

suspenders,

people without

humor,

plates without

gravy,

hair without

ribbons,

plants without

water,

children without

sweets.

 

I worry

about becoming

my

grandmother.

 

 

Lori Jackson |ljacksonAT NOSPAMtcsdk12 dot org


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Monday, April 14, 2008 3:28:55 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [1] 
# Sunday, April 13, 2008
April PAD Challenge: Day 13
Posted by Robert

Heart. There has been a lot of heart on display in your poems this month. I just wanted to get that out there and say, "Thank you." It's been a real pleasure this month to wonder how you'll put life to each of my prompts, and y'all never let me down. And I think we're synchronizing a bit.

For instance, Jay Sizemore sent me a message on Facebook late last night mentioning it would be really cool if I could put together a music-response prompt someday this month. I'm glad he thinks so, because...

Today's prompt is to write a poem based off your response to a song. You get to pick the song, but I ask that you please indicate which song sparked the poem. You can do this by quoting a line or two from the song between the title and poem--as I've done a few times this month; or you can just put the song title and artist in parentheses after the poem.

I'm really interested in reading your poems for today's prompt, but I'm just as interested in seeing which songs everyone chooses. As you may have noticed from some of my recent poems quoting songs by The Beatles, I've been listening to Abbey Road quite a bit lately, which is why today's music-response poem is inspired by The Shins' "Sleeping Lessons."

"After April, there's always May"

"So enlist every ounce of your bright blood and off with their heads."
                              -the Shins, "Sleeping Lessons"

I wait for dandelions
and dream of seeds spreading
yellow through the grass.
There are reasons to forgive
invasion and the messing
up of perfection. Lawns
and lazy afternoons,
my thumb against stem,
want to break loose.

 


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# Saturday, April 12, 2008
April PAD Challenge: Day 12
Posted by Robert

My sons are keeping me busy this morning, so let's get straight into the prompt.  We're going to write an apology poem.  You can apologize for ending a relationship, breaking a chair, or maybe you can even apologize for not being apologetic. 

Here's my poem for the day:

". . . I'm sorry"

 "Because the world is round, it turns me on."
                           -The Beatles, "Because"

Because the day was nice. . . 
Because I opened the window. . . 
Because I left for a run. . . 
Because there was an unexpected shower. . . 
Because the birds were driven inside. . . 
Because the rain followed them in. . . 
Because I decided to splash through puddles. . . 
Because you beat me home. . .
                            


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# Friday, April 11, 2008
April PAD Challenge: Day 11
Posted by Robert

Today's high temperature is supposed to be in the mid-70s, which is soooo great. The next 3 days are projected in the mid-40s: Say what?!? Gotta love Ohio in spring.

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The prompt for today is to describe something--only one thing--that is either very interesting to you or something you think is often overlooked and taken for granted. I'm thinking inanimate objects here, but I'm not going to restrict you to that. (Btw, I'm totally wondering what object Kateri Woody is going to describe--yes, I've been paying attention to all those Joker-slanted poems.)

Here's my poem for the day:

"Ornament"

-for Nancy Breen

Gold string attached to the top and bottom--
one to hold the tiny bell, the other to hold
everything up--it has blue wings, an angel
hugging a rose, words in the background.
Whenever it moves, the whole thing rings.

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The co-founder of this blog, Nancy Breen, makes these wonderful Christmas ornaments every Holiday season. Knowing that my favorite movie is "It's a Wonderful Life," Nancy made the ornament described above--a tribute to one of the most touching elements of the movie that "Every time a bell rings, an angel gets his wings."


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Day 4 Highlights
Posted by Robert

Day 4's prompt was to write a thankful and/or tribute poem. While I've been digging reading all these poems each night, this prompt was surprisingly heartwarming. There's a lot of love and thankfulness spilling out of y'all. For real.

Thankful poems were written for mothers, fathers, teachers, wives, husbands, pets, home, and so much more. Among the unique topics were TiVo, Nolo.com and Wartooth (which I'm guessing is a motorcycle?). Now, here's the thing: No matter who (or what) you wrote that thankful poem for, I hope you will take the time to share it with him or her (or it). Even the people writing thankful poems for corporations or celebrities, send them to corporate HQ or the fan club--you would not believe what a difference it makes to someone's life to hear they're appreciated. That said, so many of you have really made my 2008 something special through your kind and appreciative words about this challenge. Thank you so much!

And with that, let's roll out the thankful poems that especially caught my eye.

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Power Switch

 

Right now, most of all,

I am happy to look

at the black of my TV screen---

its shadow of inactivity

in sharp contrast to the world at large.

 

No Pokemon, no Yo Gabba Gabba,

no Oprah and all her asphyxiated

sister-girlfriends screaming over free gifts.

No Whitehouse press releases

or news from Iraq. Just quiet.

 

Somewhere a great tragedy or crime

is happening,or some kids show

is trying to teach my child to read.

Without a doubt, someone is talking

about American idol or Top Model.

 

But here there is silence. The light

of mid-morning warms my room,

and the noise of the world outside

goes unanswered from within these walls

and I can at last sit and think for myself.

 

 

Justin Evans |evjustinAT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

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For Julie: A woman of the stage

 

You are the thunder clap

in a shushed theatre

hot pink lip stick

in the grey of winter

bending and pulling

b o u n d a r i e s

until they snap back

to let other voices in.

 

 

Shannon Rayne |shanpidAT NOSPAMshaw dot ca

 

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A Lighter Look at Friendship

 

You were my friend, even when you stole a fork.

You've been my friend – though we've never been to New York.

We've called in sick – played hooky from work,

Even made friends with a 7-11 clerk.

Stayed up late – our minds corrupt,

Drank cocktails from giant paper cups.

Saw some bands, stayed out much too late,

Drank in bars that weren't so great.

You slept on the floor instead of your bed.

Sorry I ate your pizza bread.

 

 

Melanie |melanie0971AT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

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The Collective Pulse of This Blog

 

These posts, each one of them

All of you in your

Yearning and earnestness

It’s like mainlining your dreams

Such rawness and vulnerability.

Graced I am, and awestruck

To have stumbled upon this crowd,

Such hearts!

Thank you for beating within earshot

So valiantly, so true.

 

 

Corinne |c dot dixonAT NOSPAMtelus dot net

 

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LOST AND FOUND (WHEN POETRY PAYS)

 

I found $150

tucked between pages

846 & 7 of the

Norton Anthology of

Contemporary

Poetry. I’m a

satisfied customer of

the First Bank of Eavan Boland.

 

 

Matthew Falk |mdfalkAT NOSPAMsvsu dot edu

 

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Seven ways to be grateful for chocolate chips

 

I

Among the cooling cookies

the chocolate chips sit liquid hot.

semi-sweet bombs ready to explode

on your tongue.

 

II

After the dentist's drill,

A chocolate chip sits melting

Alone in the corner of my mouth.

 

III

The mouse nibbles at the corner

of a yellow plastic bag

of chocolate chips

shoved in the back of the cupboard.

Rodent ecstacy.

 

IV

She rode past the suburbs

in the back seat of a minivan

Once, fear pierced her

as her mother glanced in the rearview mirror

and saw the shadow of chocolate chips

smeared across her lips.

 

V

I was of three minds

Like three kids

Fighting over a chocolate chip cookie

 

VI

The chocolate chip rolled across the floor

A small part of the mess.

 

VII

It was evening all afternoon

It was foggy.

And the fog would never lift.

A chocolate chip cookie sat waiting

in the tupperware.

 

 

Nina Berry

 

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Despite the gifts I was given--

a diary covered in mocha and gold,

and a set of stationery from Japan

I set my face in the crook of my arm

and wept.

 

Summer and its promise of freedom

lay outside the door.

 

I could not rejoice, for

at eight years old, I knew

no one would ever

have books

or the love

for my poems

stories

and essays

like Mrs. Pine.

 

 

Carla Cherry |cmcmagiconeAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

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Chance

 

It was by chance that we met.

If I hadn’t been so tired

I wouldn’t have stopped

on my way home,

but the bar was quaint

and the night was rainy

and only a cat was lonely for me.

If there had been a table

I wouldn’t have sat at the bar,

but every table was taken,

and I was taken with the cute smile

of the fellow sitting on the end stool

so I went and sat down beside him.

If I hadn’t been tired of chardonnay

I wouldn’t have ordered a Chevis and soda

and if the new bartender hadn’t run out

of Chevis he wouldn’t have motioned

for the regular bartender.

If the regular bartender

hadn’t asked me where I was from

we never would have found out

that we both hailed from Virginia.

If he hadn’t thought I was cute

he would never have asked me

for my phone number

and if we hadn’t gone

to the same college I never

would have given it to him.

But he had and I did and

that was how it started.

Thank Heavens for chance.

 

 

Linda Brown |llbrownAT NOSPAMembarqmail dot com

 

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Cardinals (For Mom)

 

You loved cardinals.

They stood out for you,

not in huge flocks like the grey birds

that swarmed your backyard feeder,

but one or two.

The male, easy to spot

the female, with subdued color a little more elusive.

 

You loved cardinals.

They predicted the snow;

at least that's what you noticed every year.

Announcing a storm bringing white

that made them easier to see

venturing out of the holly tree.

Leaving the nest you know was there but never saw.

 

You loved cardinals.

You surrounded yourself with them.

My son counted 136 in your house;

photos, models, light-catchers, plush.

We all knew you loved them

and buying a gift was easy

as you found a new place to display number 137.

 

You loved cardinals.

Every spotting was mentally noted,

shared with me on the phone.

Now, we see them occasionally and think of you.

We watch our feeder now,

hoping to spot one before the snow

and catch that red reward of memory.

 

 

John Mucha |je dot muchaAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

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Uninspired

 

I

am ever

so

grateful

this poem

need

not

be

any

longer

than

this.

 

 

Lori Jackson |ljacksonAT NOSPAMtcsdk12 dot org

 

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Thankful today

 

My car started

after only

three tries.

 

The eggs didn't break

on the way home

from the market.

 

When I called,

you answered

on the first ring.

 

I found my

Jon Dee Graham CDs

under the couch.

 

The neighbor's dog

did his business

in someone else's yard.

 

I got a letter

in the mail

from my mom.

 

The moon rose early

in a clear-blue sky

and I noticed.

 

 

Mike Barzacchini |mjbarzAT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

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The Throne

 

You spend your hours

tucked away in a space

no one will call by name—

the john, the powder room,

the water closet—there you sit,

never complaining

about the lot given to you.

Sparkling white outside holds

swirling blue water,

covered by a wood-grain lid.

Always there when nature calls.

I think of your counterparts

around the world—holes

in the ground, the backside

of bushes. No porcelain thrones

in the African desert,

only imitations at the ruins

in Peru.

 

I’m so very glad you are here—

I flush you just to hear the sound.

 

 

Sara Diane Doyle |saras dot sojournsAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

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Burning Questions

 

Her eyes stare straight ahead

focused on the red light

at the crosswalk,

waiting.

And I wonder if she notices

the people around her?

Watching, wondering,

their faces

twisted with curiosity,

crippled by shock.

Or has she crossed this road

enough times before

that she makes them

instantly disappear,

like paper in fire?

Is it any easier today

than yesterday?

Or does it make her see red,

like the burnt skin of her face?

The light changes,

and as we pass

I think of my own scars,

deep and dark,

but hidden inside.

 

 

Linda Hofke |LNSHOFKEAT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

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Thankful poem

 

We pulled the car in-the baby clapping in the backseat

Like a mad cymbal-crashing monkey, creepy

As hell from a one-week road trip. Really

All of us were giddy with whizzing miles

Smearing Winter to Spring and back again-

Dripping luggage, pillows, half-eaten muckamuck

Into the kitchen where the cat was singing.

It was definitely a song, though not a flattering one-

Today at least, meow is a four letter word-but

It made the baby giggle and run up and down

After her, saying “home” “home” home”-

A word I’ve never heard from him before.

 

 

Hope Greene |hopeAT NOSPAMhopegreene dot com

 


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# Thursday, April 10, 2008
April PAD Challenge: Day 10
Posted by Robert

Shoooooooo, doggies! We've made it to double digits! One-third of the way to pay dirt! Thirty-three point three percent!

In other words, we're well on our way to the barren wasteland of the middle of this month and the real (really real even) gut-check time for any PAD challenge challenger. I've been having a lot of fun so far, and I hope you have, too.

Last night, I was up until the witching hour catching up on my laundry at the local laundromat. While folding up my warm T-shirts, I started thinking about the importance of location in our poems. Many people (not just poets) form their identities based off where they are born and raised, or even where their ancestors were born and raised. From favorite sports teams to music tastes, location can often play a major role in who we are.

Today, the poetry prompt is to write a location poem. You can write about a city, a building, a planet, etc. I suppose the poem doesn't necessarily need to be "about" the place, but the location should play an important role in the poem.

Here's my attempt for today from, naturally:

"The Laundromat"

There is, of course, the hum and throb,
the anonymous faces wandering in and out
with arms wide and full of warm clothes.
This is where she called me twice in one day
just because and to say she loved me.

 


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Day 3 Highlights
Posted by Robert

Day 3 was all about that funny little form the haiku. Some people complained; others moaned; but everyone took a shot (or even several shots) at writing this Japanese classic. Here are some of the pieces that made me stop and ponder.

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Crescent moon at dawn

frosted blossoms bowing low

to the rising light

 

 

Lorraine Hart |lorrainehartAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

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Scarlet clouds

drift over the sun.

Hawks snatch their prey.

 

 

Margaret Fieland |infoAT NOSPAMmargaretfieland dot com

 

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Soaring hawk

On a cold blue morning

A mole’s destiny

 

 

Judy Brassard |judyb144AT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

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Sudden rain

Pitter-patter shore of flamenco

Flip-flop

 

 

Zona Yi-Ping Tsou |besidelakeAT NOSPAMgmail dot com

 

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yellow jackets hum

hanging on old-barked branches

late for the party

 

 

Khara House |leftnwrite08AT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

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Girls in the driveway

hopping up and down, twirling,

above white clouds dance.

 

 

patti williams |pwilliamswriterAT NOSPAMaol dot com

 

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Flaming trees herald

the last drunken flight of butterflies

before the first frost

 

 

A.C. Leming |fackorfAT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

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Two trails through cracked leaves.

Light and twigs cast chickenscratch

Warmly on two trails.

 

 

David Edwards |zehayeAT NOSPAMmsn dot com

 

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as wet as the pond

fishing with my son

in the June rain

 

 

Mike Barzacchini |mjbarzAT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 

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My corgis pause

to water the dogwoods;

coats wet with spring dew

 

 

Marcus Smith |sleeperdesuAT NOSPAMhotmail dot com

 

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wind whips aloft

fire light filtered through

tree branches

 

 

AlaskanRC |Ruffian_chick24AT NOSPAMyahoo dot com

 


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