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 Wednesday, July 30, 2008
Wednesday Poetry Prompts: 013
Posted by Robert
For this week's poetry prompt, I'm also going to discuss an interesting poetic form called the cento. A cento is a poem composed of lines from other poets' poems. It's similar to the "cut-up technique" made famous by William S. Burroughs and others. The main difference is that a cento uses only lines from other poets, whereas the cut-up technique uses lines from any and every where.
I want you to go through your favorite poems and piece together your very own cento. The lines do not need to be popular or well known--but you should know where and who you're drawing from. The method that helped me was to find the lines and write them down first before trying to make something out of them. Later on, you can try this exercise on your own poems, especially ones where you might like a line or two but feel disappointed in the whole (I know I've written many that fit this description).
Anyway, here's my effort for the week:
"And we let the fish go"
A bestiary catalogs these hips are big hips: My mother is a fish.
In Goya's greatest scenes we seem to see the best minds of our generation destroyed by madness, starving hysterical naked, because we could not stop for Death, beside the white chickens.
I celebrate myself, and sing myself, "I am not a painter; I am a poet; and I eat men like air." I have gone out, a possessed witch, even as I speak, for lack of love alone--sweet to tongue and sound to eye--and that has made all the difference. They tell me you
are wicked and I believe them, for I have seen your painted women under the gas lamps luring the farm boys. We wear the mask that grins and lies, "The blind always come as such a surprise." Let us go then,
you and I: We real cool. We rage, rage against the dying of the light.
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(As you can see, many great lines were referenced and turned into a new whole, fighting for a new meaning. Btw, 21 poets--including the title--were referenced: I wonder who can figure out the most.) Poetic Forms | Poetry Craft Tips | Poetry Prompts | Poets
7/30/2008 8:27:47 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Tuesday, July 29, 2008
Poets Helping Poets: Poetry Websites of Interest
Posted by Robert
Way back in June I asked poets to share their favorite poetry-related websites, and I found myself buried under recommendations. So many of the sites were great, but I tried to be hard-nosed about which ones I included on this list, because I know you're all very busy people who can't go checking out every single cool site on the Internet.
So here are some of the top poetry-related sites:
Ones that do everything:
www.poetryfoundation.org The site for the Poetry Foundation, publisher of Poetry magazine, is packed with information and tools.
So is the one run by the Academy of American Poets at www.poets.org.
And finally, David Graham is doing a phenomenal job with his online Poetry Library.
For poets outside the U.S.:
The U.K. has its own poetry library at www.poetrylibrary.org.uk.
Canadian poets may find www.arcpoetry.ca/portage helpful.
For poetry-related news and happenings:
Check out Ron Silliman's blog at http://ronsilliman.blogspot.com.
Or go to www.poetryhut.com/wordpress.
For poetry performed:
You can visit the official site of Poetry Slam, Inc., at www.poetryslam.com, where among other things there is a poetry slam finder. Very cool.
At the Penn Sound site (http://writing.upenn.edu/pennsound), there are links to poetry recordings.
And finally for your daily poetry fix:
There's Verse Daily at www.versedaily.org,
and Garrison Keillor's Writer's Almanac (http://writersalmanac.publicradio.org).
Plus, a few commenters have already pointed out that I missed Poetry Daily at www.poetrydaily.org. (Thanks for paying attention!)
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I'd like to thank Nancy Posey, Carol (?), Russell Ragsdale, David Graham, Sue Guiney, J.P. Dancing Bear, Bill Abbott, and several others for sharing these sites and more. If you really like another site that I've not included, feel free to throw in the comments below. The more the merrier! Poetry News | Poets | Poets Helping Poets
7/29/2008 2:07:52 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Monday, July 28, 2008
New Poetic Form, Busiest Poet, and More
Posted by Robert
I've just got a few random links today, including a poetic form shared from a Poetic Asides reader and other stuff.
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The poetic form is from Salvatore Buttaci for a poem he calls The Aragman. He provided me a link to the article he wrote on the form at http://www.alongstoryshort.net/PoetCraft.html.
It's a little involved, but it looks like fun--and it provides the link for a cool anagram finder site.
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Then, there's this cool article about America's busiest poet--who is, of course, the Poet Laureate. What I like most about this piece is that several Poets Laureate are interviewed about their experiences in the position.
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Also, I found this article on spoken word poet Jon Goode from Atlanta. The piece interested me for two reasons: 1. I'm still not as well-versed in the spoken word scene as I'd like to be; and 2. I'm planning a move to Atlanta later this year. So, this may be a piece that only interests me, but just in case.
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Finally, here's a neat little piece on animated poetry, including an appeal to animators to create more poetic cartoons. I totally agree! Personal Updates | Poetic Forms | Poetry News | Poets
7/28/2008 12:41:32 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Friday, July 25, 2008
Exclusive Interview With Poet Martha Silano
Posted by Robert
Some of the poets I've interviewed for this blog were sought out by me; some have been recommended by other poets; and some have come to me on their own. In the case of Martha Silano, author of Blue Positive (Steel Toe Books, 2006), it was kind of a combination of these events.
In my interview with Julianna Baggott, Martha Silano was mentioned as a new poet she took a shining to. I started to check out Martha's work, but then I got sidetracked on some other projects. Next thing I know, Martha is introducing herself and mentioning that Julianna sent her in the direction of my blog--and would I be interested in interviewing her? Anyway, one thing led to another, and wow! Silano is a great new (to me, at least) poet.
There are many excellent poems in Silano's Blue Positive collection, but the one that really grabs me is the following:
Harborview
By the roots of my hair some god got hold of me --Sylvia Plath
By the roots of my hair, by the reinforced elastic of my floral Bravado bra, by the fraying strands
of my blue-checked briefs, some god's gotten hold of me, some god's squeezed hard the spit-up rag of my soul, rung me
like the little girl who rang our doorbell on Halloween, took our M&Ms is your baby okay? Why did they take him away?
Some god's got me thinking my milk's poison, unfit for a hungry child, some god's got me pacing,
set me flying like the black felt bats dangling in the hall, some god so that now I can't trust my best friend's
healing hands, the Phad Thai she's spooning beside the rice (ditto to the meds the doctors say will help me sleep) Poison poison!
as if the god who's got hold of me doesn't want me well, doesn't want my rapid-fire brain to slow,
wants this ride for as long as it lasts, wants to take it to its over-Niagara-in-a-barrel end, which is where
this god is taking me, one rung at a time, one ambulance, one EMT strapping me in, throwing me off this earth,
cuz I've not only killed my son but a heap of others too. Some god's got me by my shiny golden locks, by my milk-
leaking breasts, got me in this hospital, wisps like white scarves circling my head, wisps the voices of men back to bed you whore!
Some god till I'm believing I've been shot, guts dribbling out, till I'm sure I've ridden all over town in a spaceship, sure
I'm dead, a ghost, a smoldering corpse, though not before I'm holding up a shaking wall, urging the others to help me (a plane about to land
on our heads), though soon enough thrown down by two night nurses, strapped to a bed, though for weeks the flowers my in-laws sent
charred at the tips (having been to hell and back), clang of pots, hissing shower, the two blue pills my roommate left in the sink,
all signals of doom, though some god got hold of me, shook and shook me long and hard, she also brought me back.
And with that, let's get into the interview.
What are you currently up to?
I'm working on a book of poems--it's almost finished, I hope--tentatively titled The Little Office of the Immaculate Conception. It's about this mother who gets knocked up, considers fleeing, fights with her husband, almost gets a divorce, has the baby, gets seriously depressed, and continuously (alternately) screams at and revels in/adores her two children. Betcha can't wait to read it!
I've also recently begun a series of poems (I would like it to be a chapbook) about body parts. And I'm working on another full-length collection about space aliens, extra-terrestrials, Galileo, ants, space junk, the universe, and related subjects--but this one probably won't really get going till my youngest starts kindergarten, when I plan to apply to every writer's colony in the country.
I recently read in an interview that you had to suffer through postpartum psychosis to write your collection Blue Positive. Could you elaborate on that experience? For instance, I'm interested in how it affected your daily life and whether you were still able to write, etc., as you went through postpartum. Also, I'm wondering how it was initially detected.
Oh gosh, that's a big question. Thanks for being bold enough to ask it. I've encapsulated what happened during those first six months of my son's life in two essays; one appears in the April ’08 issue of Redbook, the other in Poets on Prozac: Mental Illness and the Creative Process, just out from Hopkins U. Press.
Let's just say my daily life was quite different. I don't remember much about the first week at all; I was actively psychotic--hallucinations, delusions, the whole kit and kaboodle. I mean, I thought I was in cahoots with the Unibomber. When the drugs put a stop to the active psychosis, I was left with paranoia, extreme insecurity, acute anxiety, agoraphobia, and severe depression. "Writing" consisted of scribbling down a few notes about the guy down the hallway who was out to get me. When I got home from the hospital I was still in pretty bad shape--afraid to venture down to the basement, take my son on a walk. I was also prone to gut-wrenching panic attacks. Worst of all, I'd forgotten how to laugh. I remember going to see the movie Best in Show, and not being able to figure out what was so funny (I saw it a year later and laughed my ass off).
As far as the detection issue, that was pretty much a comedy of errors. After my first panic attack (ahem, slip into psychosis), I was diagnosed with sleep deprivation and given a prescription for tranquilizers, which I never took because, of course, the doctors were trying to poison me. The next time I got hauled into Behavioral Health they finally began calling what I had postpartum depression (semi-true) and put me on antidepressants, the worst thing you can give to someone who's manic. Three cheers for modern medicine! The Paxil actually sped up the process from mania into full-blown psychosis, landing me in the ER that much faster.
More doctors and nurses are beginning to understand there's a connection between the postpartum period and bipolar disorder, but in the year 2000, at Harborview Medical Center, in the very progressive city of Seattle, I was treated like a "crazy person," not a new mom suffering from PPP. For instance, I got a wicked urinary tract infection because my hoo-ha was still bleeding and they didn't remind me to take my requisite daily sitz baths.
The collection Blue Positive seems to me to be a collection celebrating life--it covers topics such as sex, pregnancy, motherhood, and food. How did you go about assembling the poems that would go into this collection?
I hadn't thought of Blue Positive as a particularly celebratory book, but—psychosis be damned!—it's quite a mirthful romp, isn't it?
The oldest poem is "Salvaging Must Lead to Salvation"--an I-want-to-get-married piece I began in 1998. For months I was writing these pathetic (very ordinary) little square-shaped poems that were going nowhere, and then it was like the levee broke and this voice came out--not quite "me," more this potty-mouthed gal who both thoroughly adores and completely despises this man she's going to end up marrying. I knew this poem didn't fit with the manuscript I was sending out at the time (What the Truth Tastes Like), so I guess it's when I knew I had another book in me—always a relief.
Then I got hitched, knocked up, and wrote all the preggy poems ("Getting Kicked by a Fetus," "What they Don't Tell You About the Ninth Month," etc.). Then I thought the book was done (2000), and sent it out to a dozen or more places the week before I went into labor with my son. What a joke! When I "came to" after my 6-month trip through crazy-land, I realized, duh, I had actually only written a 1/4 of a book--okay, 1/2 at best. So I kept writing, and of course all the poems were now about being a mother--"While He Naps," "Explaining Current Events to a One-Year Old," "His Favorite Color is Green," etc. Urged by a friend, I sent a revised version off to the National Poetry Series; it was chosen as a finalist.
Once I knew I'd even slightly enticed a neutral reader (i.e., not my mom or sister), I kept adding, cutting, and shaping. It took two more years to (1) write the title poem; (2) figure out that I needed to begin the book with my own childhood, then move chronologically through adolescence, courtship, marriage, pregnancy, and the birth of our son; and (3) be awarded an 8-month writing residency in the wilds of southern Oregon’s Rogue River canyon, so I could get knocked up again and write the thirteen poems that close the book. And that's how it finally got finished.
Motherhood factors into a lot of your poems. How do you work in time to write around being a mother and teaching? Do you have a writing routine--or just write when you can?
Oh, goodness, I envy those people who can write whenever they want. But actually I was always poor with time management. I like rearranging junk drawers, pouring over old photos, gabbing, etc. So it's actually turned out that I write more now than ever. But okay, here's a little secret: self-imposed writing retreats. I've done three in the last year. The first two were paid for by a grant (thank you, Washington State Artist Trust), but the most recent one cost me less than $100--two nights in a friend of a friend's beachfront studio. It didn't have a stove or a bed (I slept on the floor), but hell if I cared.
Otherwise, I write when I can: on the kitchen floor while my 3 year old plays with her dinosaurs, at the dentist's office, in traffic (yes, in a moving car), at the beach, on airplanes and on fishing docks, during snack time, while they're sleeping; in between all the rest.
How do you decide where to submit? Do you have a particular process for deciding where to submit and when your poems are ready to go out?
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Under most circumstances I don't send to a place unless I’ve read a back issue/perused their online offerings or am a subscriber.
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I've gotta mostly completely love the poems, the fiction, the art work, the layout, the whole shebang, or no thanks.
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I avoid submitting to mags where I don't have a prayer (I'm not talking long shots, I'm talking completely different aesthetic).
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When a poem is getting close to feeling finished, I email it to a poet/editor friend or two, just to make sure I'm not about to make a total fool of myself. If I skip this step, and sometimes I do, it feels risky, sorta cocky--I mean, how the hell do I know? I've sent things out too early--who hasn't?--but mostly I try to sit on my hands as long as I can, even if it feels like a poem is finished. I can't always wait a year, but usually a month or two at the very minimum allows me to find all the stupid little mistakes, OR to realize the poem is actually a piece of sh*t.
I've enjoyed reading your Blue Positive blog where you deal in equal parts personal and poetic. What are your thoughts on blogging in relation to your writing? Would you recommend blogging to other poets?
I can't say I recommend blogging, though it IS a blast. It might be keeping me away from the real writing, but so far it hasn't interfered much. I like writing about magazines and writers I'm stoked about, asking questions, sharing personal stuff that's not quite poem-worthy, keeping my prose muscles toned. I really haven't thought about whether it's beneficial to my writing in any way; it's just stuff I would have told a friend or written in my journal, so why not put it out there? It reminds me a little of being a DJ at a tiny college radio station in Iowa. I would say these outlandish things, make little jokes, purposely mess up the PSAs--probably only a few cows were listening, but that was half the fun of it.
Could you name a couple poets you're currently enjoying? And why you're enjoying them?
The hard part is keeping it down to a couple. Here’s five:
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Heidi Lynn Staples—wacky, wild, mind-blowing leaps;
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Matthea Harvey—startling line breaks and imagery, lots of surprises;
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Jenny Browne—I love how her poems are both grounded and surreal;
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Sandra Beasley—oh man, has she ever changed how I see the world, but especially cherry tomatoes;
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Lee Upton—her music is sump.tu.ous. Here’s a gal who knows how to edit down to the bone.
As mentioned earlier, you teach English at two community colleges. Do you feel teaching has helped or hindered your writing?
My students bring satchels and satchels of enthusiasm, excitement, and adrenaline into my life--our conversations wind me up and set me spinning. I love holding back on what I think and instead asking more questions. I love how they talk to each other, teach each other, teach me. Without them, would I still be writing? I grow old; they stay young. I grow set in my ways; they kick me in the pants. It's an incredible honor to teach, a calling, really. If I didn't love it, if it didn't feed my creativity, I wouldn't do it. So, the short answer: helped.
If you could impart only one piece of advice to other poets, what would it be?
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Ignore all oracles.
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Don’t be too cocky or too humble.
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Figure out the poems you were given to write, and get to it.
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When an established writer gives you the critique you begged for, listen carefully and do your best to keep mum.
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To find out more about Martha Silano, check out her website at http://www.marthasilano.com/.
The site includes poems from her collections Blue Positive and What the Truth Tastes Like (Nightshade Press, 1999), as well as ordering information.
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If you're a poet or publisher interested in setting up an interview (or just a poetry lover, who wants to make a recommendation), then check out my Call for Poets. It worked for Martha Silano, and it could work for you. Personal Updates | Poet Interviews | Poetry Craft Tips | Poetry Publishing | Poets
7/25/2008 2:00:35 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Thursday, July 24, 2008
Poetic Terms: The Stanza
Posted by Robert
While this might be too basic for some of the blog readers, I thought it wouldn't hurt to share some poetic terms for poets who've not taken formal courses in poetry. Personally, I love knowing more about the various terms, and I've got such a bad memory that sometimes it's good for me to have a refresher or two on the basics.
The stanza in its most basic sense is each group of lines in a poem. For instance, in a sestina there are 7 stanzas with the first 6 stanzas containing 6 lines and the final stanza consisting of 3 lines.
Stanzas can come in several different lengths, from one to one million (or more) lines in length. In fact, some of the shorter stanzas have official names that can be applied to them.
1-line stanzas are monostich.
2-line stanzas are couplets.
3-line stanzas are tercets.
4-line stanzas are quatrains.
5-line stanzas are quintains (or cinquains).
6-line stanzas are sixains (or sestets).
7-line stanzas are septets.
8-line stanzas are octaves.
So, getting back to the sestina, we could be all smart and say it is composed of six sixains followed by a tercet.
Or we could just say a sestina is composed of a sadistic pattern of end words that leave many poets curled up in a fetal position chanting, "There's no place like home," while clicking their heels together with their eyes shut tight against the world. Poetry Craft Tips | Poetic Terms
7/24/2008 10:48:43 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Wednesday, July 23, 2008
Wednesday Poetry Prompts: 012
Posted by Robert
Poetry is a form of communication--communication between the poet and the reader. But can poetry also be a form of instruction? Possibly. For this week's poetry prompt, I want you to write a poem with the title of "How to (blank)" where you use the title as the springboard for your poem.
You can insert whatever you wish into that blank and then go in any direction with the actual poem. That is, you don't have to write out the recipe for a poem called "How to make mama's lasagna"--instead, you could talk about mama, or lasagna, or something completely different. As with all the Wednesday prompts, feel free to have fun with it and get creative.
Here's my attempt for the day:
"How to be a good parent"
I spell out the names of my sons and place them in a hat. I wear the hat at all times hoping I will never need to reach inside.
Poetry Prompts
7/23/2008 9:41:50 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Tuesday, July 22, 2008
New Poetic Form: The Roundabout
Posted by Robert
Our Poetic Asides inaugural Poet Laureate, Sara Diane Doyle, has been busy-busy-busy this summer working with teen writers. But not too busy to share with her fellow Poetic Asides crew a new poetic form she developed with one of her students, David Edwards. Since Sara knows the form best, I'll let her explain the form to you in her own words.
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A few months ago I began exploring various poetic forms. With each form I tried, I would post my attempt on a forum for teen writers, where I am a mentor. One of the teens, David Edwards, got interested in forms, especially the “created” forms. He asked if anyone could invent a form and I said “sure!” Then, he got the crazy idea that we should create a form together.
To start, we wanted to throw in every poetic element that we really liked. David came up with the meter and feet and I added in the repeating line. We came up with the rhyme scheme and length together. The result is a form we call the Roundabout. In this form, the rhyme scheme comes full circle while offering repetition of one line in each rhyme set.
The Roundabout is a four stanza poem, with each stanza consisting of 5 lines. The poem is written in iambic and the lines have 4 feet, 3 feet, 2 feet, 2 feet and 3 feet respectively. The rhyme scheme is abccb/bcddc/cdaad/dabba. Roundabouts can be on any subject.
Several of the writers on our forum have written Roundabouts and have had a blast." We would love for other poets to give it a try! Here are some examples to get you started.
Crash
by David Edwards
Around around the carousel
across the circles face
we cry we shout
we crash about
across the circles face
and ever always breakneck pace
by this unending route
and twists and turns
and breaks and burns
by this unending route
of ever always in and out
the yearling quickly learns
to run and yell
at ocean’s swell
the yearling quickly learns
to run and leap and then he earns
but he will never tell
there’s not a chase
that wins the race
but he will never tell.
When Spring Trips ‘Round
by Sara Diane Doyle
When wildflowers bloom once more
and raindrops touch the earth,
the faeries come
to start the hum
and raindrops touch the earth!
Come join the song, the dance the mirth!
Enjoy the juicy plum.
beneath the sun
'til day is done-
enjoy the juicy plum!
The clouds let out the beating drum-
rejoice with us as one.
Our joy we pour
for pain we bore-
rejoice with us as one.
Of gleeful hope, the snow knows none,
but speaks of faeries lore,
of magic birth,
the greatest worth
but speaks of faeries lore.
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7/22/2008 9:25:59 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Monday, July 21, 2008
Exclusive Interview With Poet Laureate Denise Low!
Posted by Robert
Wow! What a weekend! I celebrated with 30th birthday with my sons, announced my engagement to poet Tammy F. Trendle, and completed an interview with the poet laureate of Kansas: Denise Low. (So yeah, 30's getting off to a great start!)
Yes, Denise Low agreed to answer a few questions for the Poetic Asides blog, which is quite an honor when you consider everything else she's currently up to:
- Working on a new collection of poetry/prose on the theme of ghost stories set in the west, "so there are settler, American Indian, and contemporary ghosts to consider, including William Burroughs and William Stafford."
- Working on an inter-genre project of text, paintings by Paul Hotvedt, and video by Joshua Kendall, with packaging by Deborah Dillon. "This is based on three years of Paul's seasonal plein air paintings."
- Working with Mohamad El Hodiri, "one of my hometown buddies," on translating poetry by Mohamed Afifi Matar, a leading Egyptian poet.
- Releasing (through Backwaters Press) a collection of her literary essays about contemporary Great Plains writers.
Low also mentions, "I should also comment on a failed project: I was working on a collection of poems about birds--working down my Audubon check-off list plus observing the Kansas area birds. I just could not pull it off! About half of the poems never developed beyond journal observation. I am proud of myself for recognizing when to let go."
Learning to let go of a great idea that's just not working (and shows no signs of doing so) is a great lesson for any poet. But we're not letting go of Low just yet. Here's a little Q&A first:
You're the poet laureate of Kansas. So, what it's like being a State Poet Laureate?
Being poet laureate has helped me in so many ways. I can now articulate more clearly how my role as a poet is community-based. All poets are advocates for the arts. All poets work with a centuries-old tradition of wisdom. We add our own pieces to that tradition, from our time, and that great river keeps flowing forward. As a poet laureate, I have become more excited about younger poets and their upcoming roles of spokespersons for their generations. All poets are revolutionaries, creating “it” new each morning.
Does being a poet laureate make it any more difficult to find time to write?
This position, truly, has given me more opportunities to travel, which has inspired new writing. Also, the honor has given me confidence. I appreciate the state of Kansas for this public support of an art form that is sometimes ridiculed. Thirty-eight states now have poets laureate. So the appearances have been more inspiring than detrimental. I am glad that at this time in my life, I have no serious family obligations. I went into the position with the understanding that it would take up most of my free time, and it has. Nonetheless, ideas keep coming to me, and they find form on paper.
Your blog covers events and poets from the Kansas and Kansas City region. How important do you feel it is for a poet's development to become a part of the poetry community on a local level?
As poets, I believe we speak for our time and our generation. I think it is very important to understand our historic contexts. As I have researched local history and my family genealogy, which includes settler and some Indigenous [Lenape (Delaware) and Cherokee] heritage, I have come to understand the unspoken influences on my poetry—my dialect, my attunement to space, my education, my religions. I look to peer poets, whether I read them or hear their performances, for an understanding of how I fit into the community and how I do not. I think it is very important for poets to be aware of those subliminal influences. Our communities help us stay in touch with what is original and what is cliché. And finally, poetry is community based. We write for an audience, I believe, even if it is a disembodied part of ourselves. Very few poets write and are content to put the manuscripts into a shoebox. Most wish to be heard/read and understood.
I found your poem "Thailand Journal: Message from Cambodia" in a back issue of Coal City Review. In the poem, the narrator discusses her son's journeys, touching on the communication and distance between a mother and her grown son. Could you talk a little about this poem? For instance, I'm interested in whether this poem is autobiographical.
That poem is indeed autobiographical. I have two wonderful sons and a dear stepdaughter. I try not to embarrass them too much, but indeed son Daniel lived in Thailand almost three years. He is fluent in Thai. It was an experience of the “beginner’s mind” of Buddhism for me to visit him and experience total role reversal. This was not what I expected from my first journey to another country—something so primal. For the poet who writes autobiographically, I believe that the challenge is to find the unexpected, not the ordinary details of a person’s life. So this took me by surprise.
There is another poem dedicated to my other son, that is a twin experience for me, as I felt the surprise of our ongoing relationship:
Whale Watching: Farallon Islands
Now my grown son is a well known
stranger. We go whale watching
together, close again as we were
when he was small and never
left my side. Whales swim
in family groups. From the boat
we see two adults, their spray
smelling of sea-plants.
They steer through waves and dive,
spotted flukes the last sign
before they disappear. We lower
binoculars and I sense
underwater movements like giants
rumbling through a cavern.
The ship monitor shows knolls
below, in a rocky landscape.
The boat motor is too loud
to talk over but we wait together
until they rise to the surface and blow
exhaled breath alongside
and again the grassy smell.
The procession of behemoths
meanders, and our wooden boat follows,
slapping swells, an awkward cousin,
clumsy on the ceiling of their world.
As a follow-up, that poem deals specifically with communication. Do you feel communication is an important purpose of poetry?
My mentor Carolyn Doty, a novelist, always stressed that a writer’s first duty is to communicate. I believe that. We can free write or develop elaborate mental air castles—but language, by its nature, puts us into communication with other folks. The first rule, then, is: be understood.
What and who are you currently reading?
I just finished Amy Bloom’s Away. I loved her sense of fluid time and her skill in creating it. I am reading Carlos Castaneda’s The Fire from Within—I am interested in his idea of “assemblage points”—which are like set points for perceptions of realities. I just finished Diane Glancy’s book of poetry Asylum in the Grasslands. She uses such fine, strong imagery. I recently read Eric Gansworth’s A Half-Life of Cardio-Pulmonary Function: Poems and Paintings, which is based on Onondaga beadwork concepts, and it is a remarkable achivement. Next up, as far as poetry books, are Jim Spurr’s Open Mike Thursday Night—he’s an Oklahoma poet—and Airs & Voices: Poems by Paula Bonnell, from BookMark Press. I read a few poems already and loved them. There is so much to read and so little time!
If you could pass on only one piece of advice to other poets, what would it be?
I appreciate Paul Muldoon’s answer to that question when he visited Lawrence lately—remain humble. Be open. I understand that to mean that receptivity allows for authentic poetry. Okay, second piece of advice: read as much as you can. And I appreciate this chance to be part of your project!
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To check out Denise Low's blog, go to http://deniselow.blogspot.com/. It's great for all lovers of poetry, but especially those from the Great Plains.
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Also, here's a cool, little thread I found on Poets.org where it appears Denise answered some forum questions on that site: http://www.poets.org/forum/viewtopic.php?t=14960.
This thread includes the interview and some more examples of her poetry.
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To check out other poet interviews on Poetic Asides, go to: http://blog.writersdigest.com/poeticasides/CategoryView,category,Poet%20Interviews.aspx
In there, you'll find interviews with poets, such as Dorianne Laux, Jillian Weise, Joseph Mills, John Korn, Helene Cardona, Julianna Baggott, and more!
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7/21/2008 12:26:06 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Friday, July 18, 2008
It's official!
Posted by Robert
I turned 30 years old today. If anyone wants a fun Friday prompt, they can write a poem about the number 30 or about birthdays. I'd write one, but I'm overly stuffed from an excellent birthday lunch at this Mexican place over here with my co-workers. Hope everyone has a great weekend!
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7/18/2008 1:06:38 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Thursday, July 17, 2008
Kay Ryan tapped as next U.S. Poet Laureate!
Posted by Robert
Kay Ryan will succeed Charles Simic as the 16th Poet Laureate of the United States. She was selected by James H. Billington, the librarian of Congress, with advice offered by poets, critics and academics around the country.
Here's the piece from the NY Times: "Kay Ryan, Outsider With Sly Style, Named Poet Laureate," by Patricia Cohen.
In the piece, Ryan says of writing poetry: "I wanted to do it, but I didn't want to expose myself."
Also, here's the official release from the Library of Congress: Librarian of Congress Appoints Kay Ryan Poet Laureate.
Ryan becomes the first woman Poet Laureate since Louise Gluck held the post 2003-2004.
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7/17/2008 12:18:05 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Wednesday, July 16, 2008
Wednesday Poetry Prompts: 011
Posted by Robert
Last year I read Ted Kooser's The Poetry Home Repair Manual (Bison Books) and was struck by how he writes every one of his poems with an audience in mind. For today's prompt I want you to pick an audience and write a poem to that audience. Put the name of your audience in the title of your poem. Your audience can be dead or alive, real or imagined, general or specific--but you must pick an audience to which you're writing.
Here's my attempt:
"Stapler"
The paperclips hold nothing over your metal breath, the way I can push you down and not worry my papers will come undone. Come time to refill your belly, you may misfire a staple or two, but once fed I know where my hands go to find their attachment. You kerpepunk into the evening with the determination of finding your dreams affixed to a desk.
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(Of course, the above audience--in my mind--is addressed to the inanimate object, a stapler, but also to those brave people who staple day in and day out without getting their full stapling due.) Personal Updates | Poetry Prompts | Poets
7/16/2008 10:35:50 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Poets Helping Poets: On Handling Bio Notes
Posted by Robert
Over on Facebook, I have a personal account with a bunch of poetry friends, as well as a Poetic Asides group with a lot of members. So yesterday I asked the published poets who are members to share a little bit of advice on writing those tricky little bio notes that poets are often asked to include with their poetry submissions to poetry journals and magazines.
The response was overwhelming. I'm just now digging out of all the great advice. Here's what some of them had to share:
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I generally strive for a 50- to 75-word bio, featuring only the most recent and relevant info about my writing life. I list the three publications of which I'm proudest first, then two or three accolades (awards, residencies, honors). If appropriate, I tailor the bio for the publication in which it will appear. For example, if it has a regional focus, I'm likely to mention my previous publications in that region. If there's room, I'll also reference my graduate degree in poetry and the poetry-related community service I do. As my career evolves, I revisit and update my bio regularly so that it represents the best of my writing life each time it appears.
Sage Cohen
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The length of a bio can walk a very fine line. As a reader of journals I'm not too interested in work where the bio is only "so and so lives in Atlanta". I want to know a little something about the poet but at the same time I don't want to be lulled to boredom by reading an overly verbose bio with dozens of credits listed. I use the same approach, mentioning my background very briefly (maybe a word about my novels) and mentioning a few journals where my work has appeared if I mention any at all.
David LaBounty
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Typically in my bio I give the title of my book and then list only three journals, or four at the most, where my poems have been published. When I read a bio that lists a whole string of journals, regardless of whether there are other credits included, it makes me suspect that the poet is feeling insecure--in the same way that a poet who writes past the ending of a poem doesn't trust the reader. I prefer a bio that is selective. This is the time to put your best out there, not every little indication that someone likes your work.
Susan Meyers
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I do exactly what the editor asks. If he asks for three sentences, I send three sentences. I do not send six and suggest that the editor edit as he likes. Chances are he won't like that at all! If the request for a bio is vague, I check the journal for examples. I never send an exceedingly long bio as I'm turned off by them, especially when they're very braggy. I include usually no more than three journals where my work has appeared. I never use numbers. I find it a complete turn-off when I read a bio that says something like, "So and so has published 502 poems in 138 journals." Bean counting is unattractive and amateurish. I never include information about pets, one, because I don't have any, and two, because I never am interested in pet information in other people's bios. I include my book titles, some journals, what I do for work, maybe where I live, any significant prizes. And those are the things I'm interested in when I read other poets' bios.
Diane Lockward
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The formula: [academic accomplishments (MFA/PhD, Grants/Awards)] + [3 or less previous publishing credits (if this bothers you, tack "and elsewhere" on the end)] + [books published or to be published and/or writerly positions, such as "Nonfiction Editor"] = satisfactory bio.
Todd Dillard
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Sometimes the obvious must be stated: follow the press or publication's guidelines if they are available, and select information that may be of particular interest to the publisher, such as work in journals with compatible styles or thematic interest. Beyond that, select the information that is most likely to make the reader stop and give your manuscript a close look rather than skim through. A small number of relevant items suggests the tip of the iceberg, while including too much sounds desperate. If you do feel it necessary to include a large number of items, invite the editor to select those that are most relevant for contributors' notes rather than expect everything to be included.
J.D. Smith
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Remember that bios are not written in first person, and create a few single sentence and a short paragraph bios to keep on file, making sure to match the tone of the bio with the publication. If your collection of poems about death makes it into a serious anthology, don't use phrases like "loves the feeling of mud squishing between his toes" or "spends her free time singing karaoke on free beer night".
If it's a lighter-hearted publication, have a little fun with your bio without losing focus of what a bio is for - to let the reader know a little bit about who you are, what you do, and why you are significant enough to need a bio.
Lisa Abeyta
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Less is more. A bio note is not a resume.
Aaron Fagan
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If the editor of the magazine does not provide guidelines, I usually keep it to three sentences, including one that illustrates whether I have been published previously and where. I usually begin the bio with my name, where I am from, and a bit about my educational background. The second sentence is usually something quirky about myself, and the final sentence is where I have been published.
Serena M. Agusto-Cox
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First of all, it's important see what guidelines the journal may set on length and/or type of content and follow those precisely. I always mix my bio with some (and the operative word is 'some') of my publishing credits as well as personal comments. It's important to show that you've published, if you have, and yet let the editor know a little of your human side, as well. It should go without saying that you should check your bio for spelling and punctuation before sending it.
Pris Campbell
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Keep it short and definitely within any word or character limit (for example, keep it much shorter than this paragraph). Mention only the publications in which your work has appeared most recently (unless you've previously published in the publication for which you're submitting the bio; then, it's nice to acknowledge that). If you've published books or worked on projects that are important to you, put those near the beginning. Keep personal details to a minimum.
Okay, now here are the caveats: Some people write extremely clever and very personal off-the-wall bios. They are entertaining if written well. Try to see what other bios people have written for that publication to determine whether that's a good direction. And if you don't think you can write that kind of a bio well (I don't think I can), consider sticking with the more plain Jane variety.
Joannie Stangeland
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In my experience, you have to know your audience. For example, for some journals, I use the opening "Brian Spears is not related to the singer, but he does have a teenaged daughter named Brittany. He hopes she will forgive him one day." storySouth used that bit, but I didn't include it when I was published in The Southern Review. I sent it to Measure, and the editors cut it, but I sent it to them because I knew them from grad school, and I figured I could get away with it.
My basic structure includes this information: recent publications, awards, and what I'm doing now. I expand it depending on the journal I'm sending to, and how adventurous I perceive them to be. Hope that helps.
Brian Spears
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There has to be something interesting; a hook in that bio that grabs them as much as what you have written would. Think of your bio as yet more branding for what you are trying to sell. It has to be interesting.
Natalie Williams
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