# Monday, March 30, 2009
Interview With 2008 Poetic Asides Poet Laureate Sara Diane Doyle
Posted by Robert

Quick note: I plan on sharing the complete rules, how-to's, advice, etc., on the 2009 April PAD Challenge tomorrow right here on the blog. There's no special registration required--so just check back in tomorrow to get the full scoop on what's expected.

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Okay, so one of the cool things about the 2008 April PAD Challenge is that I was able to select a Poetic Asides Poet Laureate. It was a tough decision last year, but Sara Diane Doyle shared some truly great poems through the month. See the announcement (and read some of here April poems) by clicking here.

She even shared a new poetic form with the group after the challenge was over called The Roundabout. You can check out that poetic form by clicking here.

Anyway, she recently let me interview her to see what she's been up to and to share advice with poets new to the April PAD Challenge.

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What've you been up to since being named the 2008 April PAD Challenge Poet Laureate?

 

You mean besides enjoying life in Colorado?  Well, I've spent the last year mentoring teen writers, including challenging them with a 12-week poetry project last fall.  In November, I wrote a novel with National Novel Writing Month.  As of January, I've been focusing on submitting my work, both poetry and prose, to markets. 

 

Who (or what) have you been reading recently?

 

In 2008, I read 100 books, so I had the chance to read a lot of great writers, including: N.M. Kelby, C.S. Lewis, Alice Hoffman, Madeleine L'Engle, Jane Austen, Garth Nix, and Billy Collins. This year, I'm taking it easier.  My current favorites are Jim Butcher's Dresden Files, and my favorite poetry collection of the last few months is Billy Collins' Ballistics.  Much of my reading time goes to reading the writings of the teenagers on the forum where I mentor.

 

How did you manage to write so many good poems throughout the month of April last year?

 

I don't have a secret recipe, if that's what you're asking!  But I know that the more I'm thinking about poetry, the more I'm reading it and writing it, the better I seem to get.  So being able to read the poems others were posting helped--it kept spurring me on to better poetry! Also, having the prompts helped a lot.  Normally, I have one good poem every so often, largely because I wait to be hit with a great idea.  But having a starting point helped get those ideas going.  I also tried my hardest to find a different angle on the prompt each day.  For example, on day one, when the prompt was to write about "firsts," I saw many poems about first love, first kiss, first child, etc.  So I said to myself, "what is a first no one else has written about yet?"  That's how I came up with the idea to write about the first time I donated blood.  I love to find the tiny, hidden subjects.  And if it makes anyone feel better, I had some real clunkers last year--they STILL make me cringe when I read them.  So don't try to write 30 amazing poems, write 30 good poems and some of them will be amazing.

 

Any big plans or goals for 2009?

 

My goal this year is to get published.  So I'm sending out submissions of both poetry and short stories on a regular basis.  I'd also like to finish my current novel.  And maybe learn another language.  I like to have fun goals, and some that I know I can reach with a little effort.  Unreachable goals aren't helpful at all. 

 

What's the best piece of advice you've ever been given? And by who?

 

There are two that vie for first place.  The first was "celebrate rejection."  My high school creative writing teacher, Mrs. Warner, made this a huge part of our class--she threw a party for the first rejection slip, and really taught me how to embrace the more negative part of the writing life.  Rejection is part of the writing business, and if you can't deal with it, or if you take it too personally, it's going to kill you.  So I celebrate every rejection I earn--earning a rejection means I'm putting my work out there, and that's how I will get published. 

 

The second is from one of my favorite authors, Jodi Picoult.  Her advice: "You can't edit a blank page."  That statement has gotten me writing more times than not.  A blank page can be intimidating, and I know how easy it is to give into the white space. Sometimes, we are afraid for writing crap, afraid of what will come out, afraid it will be true, etc.  But we can't do anything with that fear.  We can't edit it, we can't cut out the bad parts, we can't make it better.  But if we are willing to write, to fill the blank page, then we can move forward.  Most writers aren't brilliant in the first draft.  We all have to just get the words down.  Once we've done that, it's much easier to make things better!

 

Do you have any advice for the poets who are entering the 2009 April PAD Challenge?

 

Yes!  Get up and read the prompt early each day.  Get it into your head.  Then take some time to see it from all sides before you write.  Some days, an idea will jump out right away, but some days it might take until nine at night.  Don't be afraid to let the idea brew for a while!  Pull out all the old tools you were taught in grade school: alliteration, meter, imagery, similes, metaphors, symbolism.  Put them to good use.  Try some new forms, even if the prompt doesn't call for it.  I often use www.shadowpoetry.com as a resource, they list all sorts of poetic forms. 

 

Then, just write.  Get it out.  Remember, you can edit it later.

 

And most of all, have fun!  I had a blast last year, and I'm looking forward to this year's prompts.  Let your friends and family know what you are doing, let them read some of your work.  Be excited about poetry!


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# Thursday, March 26, 2009
Interview With Poet Patricia Fargnoli
Posted by Robert

It's not every day that I get an opportunity to interview a former poet laureate. So when I was afforded the chance to read Patricia Fargnoli's Duties of the Spirit (Tupelo Press), I jumped at the chance to interview the former New Hampshire Poet Laureate (her term ended earlier this year).

Though Fargnoli is a retired psychotherapist, she just published her first collection of poems Necessary Light (Utah State University Press) in 1999. And has made her presence felt in the poetry community in a very short period of time with another full-length collection and chapbook in the same 10-year span. Oh yeah, Fargnoli is also in the final stages of publishing another collection with Tupelo Press.

Here's one of my favorites (I have many) from Duties of the Spirit:

The Undeniable Pressure of Existence

I saw the fox running by the side of the road
past the turned-away brick faces of the condominiums
past the Citco gas station with its line of cars and trucks
and he ran, limping, gaunt, matted dull haired
past Jim's Pizza, past the Wash-O-Mat
past the Thai Garden, his sides heaving like bellows
and he kept running to where the interstate
crossed the state road and he reached it and ran on
under the underpass and beyond it past the perfect
rows of split-levels, their identical driveways
their brookless and forestless yards,
and from my moving car, I watched him,
helpless to do anything to help him, certain he was beyond
any aid, any desire to save him, and he ran loping on,
far out of his element, sick, panting, starving,
his eyes fixed on some point ahead of him,
some possible salvation
in all this hopelessness, that only only he could see.

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What are you currently up to?

 

On March 22, I finished my 3 1/2-year term as New Hampshire's Poet Laureate.   And my new book, Then, Something, which is due to be published in fall by Tupelo Press, is at the publishers and soon to go into production.  We've already decided on the cover.  I've also recently finished work with two private tutorial students...all of which should mean that I could rest a while, and, hopefully, turn my energies toward writing new work. But March's calendar is full of readings I want to attend and lunches with poet/friends and teaching my private class.  And April's only a little freer.  The last week in April and the beginning of May I'm going to The Dorset Writer's Colony in Vermont for a week  (and would go longer if I didn't have a cat and no one for him to live with in my absence).  In June, I'm teaching at an Elderhostel for a week, and leading an Ekphrasis workshop in July and a workshop for Teachers in August.  In between, I'm giving a couple of readings....and will be working at proofreading my manuscript for the press...and writing a reader's guide. Whew!  Would you believe I've been "retired" for 10 years now?

 

You've just recently finished up a stint as New Hampshire's Poet Laureate. What were your duties? Were you able to accomplish everything you wanted?

 

As poet laureate, I had no official duties.  Some poet laureates do a little or nothing; some do a lot. I like that what I did was left entirely up to me so that I could use the skills and interests I have in the way I wanted to.  I'd decided from the outset that I wanted to do something for children, something for libraries and something for New Hampshire poets.  And I'm proud that I accomplished all three. With the support of the NH State Library, The Writer's Project and the NH Council on the Arts, I was able to recruit 43 poet-volunteers from around the state, and to organize a "Children's Poetry Day in the Libraries Day" the first April after I was elected. The Governor issued a proclamation proclaiming April 14th as statewide "Children's Poetry Day;"  and each volunteer put on a program for children in a library near him/her.  We published articles in almost every regional magazine promoting the importance of poetry in children's lives and served about 350 children and parents on that day.

 

I also initiated (again with the help of Art Council personnel) a "New Hampshire Poets Showcase" link to the Arts Council website.  Every two weeks we featured a new NH poet with a poem, bio, photo, links and a paragraph about how their poem came to be. 

 

I also did readings and workshops around the state and attended civil functions occasionally. And I delivered a poem at the Governor's Inauguration.

 

When I look back at what I accomplished I'm amazed that I could do it.  I had reservations about accepting the position in the beginning because of some chronic health problems that have limited my mobility and energy.  But I'm glad I didn't turn it down; the position was life-enriching. I made many friends and have some wonderful memories.

 

When and why did you begin publishing poetry?

 

I began writing and studying poetry seriously when I was in my mid-30's in a graduate class with Brendan Galvin at Central CT State University.  Along with 7 other women who became my close friends (and are to this day), I took the class for several years.  My first poems were published in Tendril (which has been gone for years) and Poet Lore.  In fact, Brendan sent out my work to Tendril without telling me and when, one of the poems was accepted, he called me from his vacationing on Cape Cod to give me the news.

 

I was hooked.  I've always loved poetry and had written it earlier...publishing in the high school newspaper etc., but I knew nothing then about contemporary poetry and the only two poets' names I was familiar with were Sylvia Plath and Robert Lowell.  However, it was many years later, when I was 62, that I published my first book, Necessary Light, after Mary Oliver chose it as the May Swenson Award winner.

 

The "why" is harder to explain.  Besides the love of poetry, there's the challenge of getting what can't be easily said into words; the thrill of connecting in a deep way to readers,  the adrenaline rush when you open an acceptance letter and the way writing a poem can somehow make sense of your life.

 

Do you have any method to where and when you submit your poems?

 

Hmmm.  I usually submit about 3 times a year....in late September,  January, and maybe June (to those journals that accept summer submissions).  But this isn't rigid and if I have some poems I want to send out and have the time, I'll send them.  I have a list of journals I'd like to have my poems in...a rather long list.  Over the years, I've subscribed to many of them and I know what kind of work they take.  I believe strongly that poets shouldn't be expecting editors to publish them if they, themselves, aren't supporting the work of presses, literary journals, and other poets.

 

I only occasionally do simultaneous submissions because it's hard to keep track of them. But I do them more lately because I am 71 and time is passing far too quickly...I can't afford to wait a year to hear results anymore...especially since the competition is so fierce and rejection so frequent.  And when I do submit simultaneously, I don't send to more than 3 journals at a time, or to journals that don't accept them.   But other than that, I have no specific method.

 

Duties of the Spirit (Tupelo Press) won the Jane Kenyon Poetry Book Award and your first collection Necessary Light (Utah State University Press) won the May Swenson Book Award. What do you think makes a good collection?

 

Oh Robert, it is so, so subjective!  I've several times been a judge or early-round judge of a book competition so I've read hundreds of manuscripts and I can tell what impresses me....though it probably would be different for someone else.  At the top of my list is "Vision."   I mean that the book presents the poet's unique way of looking at the world....some fragment of the whole.  And the poems must "matter" and, when taken together, seem like a cohesive whole (even though there may be single poems that are different from most of the others)....I don't have patience with the superficial or pretentious language that reveals nothing when you look under it.  I look for depth.  Craft matters to me greatly. And once I gave top prize to a book (a novel in verse) mainly because I fell in love with the "voice" of the protagonist. (He was an ironic everyman.) Of course, the craft was impeccable too.

 

What do you look for in a good poem?

 

Depth, beauty, spirit, craft, sound, humanity.  Sometimes fracturing and remaking of reality, so that I as a reader can see a thing newly. Some news to help me understand my own life and its meaning.

 

In Duties of the Spirit, you deal with nature and aging--even confronting death. These topics are big and well-traveled, yet you make them your own. I'm sure part of your success comes back to revision. So, how much time do you commit to revision? And how do you know a poem is done?

 

Revision is, for me, the process by which a poem comes into being. My early drafts are terrible.  I often overwrite pushing myself past all the voices in my head that say "Ugh" just in order to get words onto the page where they can be worked at.  I then will do maybe 3 or 4 quick revisions and put it away for at least a few days.  Then I work at it again.  If I can get it into what begins to feel to me like a poem and I'm as far as I can go, I'll bring it to one of my workshops (there are 2; one of them is online). That usually results in another revision. I have what I call my "WP file,"  which stands for "Working Poems."   The revised draft (if I'm still not satisfied which is usually the case) goes into that file...and periodically, I'll pull it up and work some more.

 

In later drafts, often, I'm picking at single words, or perhaps upping the ante on a phrase that feels flat...or experimenting with shifting the order around or changing line-breaks...that kind of thing.  I've often worked this way on a poem for years before I'm satisfied...if I ever am. And even when I send out a poem, I'll later revise it... or even after it's published.  I don't know when a poem is done....it's mostly just let go.

 

I think of revision as being like a sculptor with a block of marble.  The poet chips and chips away at the poem until the real poem (hopefully) emerges from the block of words.

 

Who (or what) have you been reading recently?

 

I read poetry every day...and not just a little. I have 7 bookcases (3 of them tall ones) in my 2 room apartment and they are all filled with books of poetry. I spend more on poetry than I do on anything else except food and rent.  Currently on my bedstand (which means I'm reading them) are: Robert Hass Time and Materials (which I'm reading for the second time); Mary Oliver's New Evidence; Louise Gluck's Averno (also reading for the 2nd time); Borges This Craft of Verse; Rebecca Seiferle, Bitters; BAP, Charles Wright, ed;  Henri Coles, Blackbird and Wolf; Charles Bennett's How to Make a Woman Out of Water; Ruth Stone's What Love Comes to; The Making of A Sonnet, Edward Hirsch and Eavan Boland; Dante's Divine Comedy; and the current issues of several journals: The Georgia Review, Shenandoah,The Harvard Review and The American Poetry Journal.

 

On order are Ann Fisher-Wirth's Carta Marina and Jack Gilbert's new book (which I've forgotten the name of).

 

If you could offer only one piece of advice to your fellow poets, what would it be?

 

Read, read, read, and support other poets, publishers and the poetry community.

 

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To learn more about Patricia Fargnoli, check out her website at www.patriciafargnoli.com.

 


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Thursday, March 26, 2009 9:07:12 PM (GMT Standard Time, UTC+00:00)  #  Comments [6] 
Children's poetry in April!
Posted by Robert

Gregory K. Pincus wanted to share the following announcement from his blog about April: http://gottabook.blogspot.com/2009/03/announcing-30-poets30-days.html

Basically, he's going to post a previously unpublished poem by a different children's poet each day in April, including poets like Jack Prelutsky, Jane Yolen, Nikki Giovanni, and many more.

Should be fun reading for all ages!

 


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# Wednesday, March 25, 2009
Wednesday Poetry Prompts: 042
Posted by Robert

This is the last Wednesday Poetry Prompt before the 2009 April PAD Challenge, which is when we'll be writing a poem every single day (oh yeah!). The Wednesday Poetry Prompts will resume in May.

For this prompt, I want you to write a character study poem. Think about people you know or complete strangers. Like an artist, study them and then write. Stick to the facts; or speculate. I suppose you could even write a character study of a fictional character (such as Wonder Woman or Darth Vader).

Here's my attempt for the day:

"Little Marc"

The lights go out when he walks down the street.
No one wants to mess with him as he struts
over sidewalk chalk--this man who smiles at
a fight and knows every woman's name.
I've lived near him my whole life and never
once wanted to see him coming my way,
always relieved when our conversations
come to an end and no punches thrown. I'm
not sure how he got his name, and never
have heard it used in his presence. But once,
Johnny Andrews told me he saw Little
Marc so drunk that he'd stripped all his clothes down
to his tighty-whiteys. "He was going
on and on about how nobody knows
what it's like to be feared, how nobody's
ever got the guts to talk to him. So,
Darryl Pokerman--from southside--puts his
arms around him and says, 'It's okay, man.
Everything's gonna be okay.' But
Little Marc just pushed him off and called him
a fag," said Johnny. I didn't need Johnny
to go on, but he did anyway, "So,
of course, Little Marc busted a stick on
Darryl's head and kept kicking him until
some guys peeled him off, because you know how
he can get." And, of course, everyone
who knows Little Marc knows how he can get.

 


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# Tuesday, March 24, 2009
Poetry FAQs: How do you make time to write?
Posted by Robert

Seems like many writers often lament they don't have enough time to write. Some of these writers ask me how I do it, or wonder aloud how writers like Joyce Carol Oates or Stephen King publish so much so often. I can't speak for other writers, but I can give my own take on the topic of making time to write: I've almost always got time.

That's not to say I'm not busy-busy-busy. As anyone who knows me in real life can attest, I'm tremendously busy and productive all the time--from cooking and cleaning at home to editing books and coding databases for work (which also just happens to take place at home). I say I've almost always got time, because I make time for my writing. And I improvise.

For instance, this past Saturday, I spent a delightful afternoon in Atlanta with my wife, son, and mother (who was visiting from Ohio) by eating at The Varsity, strolling past the Fox Theatre, and walking around Stone Mountain. Ideas and images flooded my brain, but I had neither pen nor paper. In fact, many of the no-time writers mentioned above would say I had no time either. Quite a predicament!

Here's how I improvised: I still had a cell phone, so I started typing a text message to myself of the lines rolling around in my head. When I finished, I saved the text to my drafts (I could've also sent them to my email address). Since the day was an inspiring one, I did this a few times on Saturday--all while enjoying the day with my wife, son, and mother.

Other ways I've written through the years have included (but are not limited to) writing on napkins, receipts, placemats, business cards, flyers, menus, Post-It notes, etc. If there's the tiniest bit of white space (and you have a writing utensil--even a crayon will do), then you can write.

Since I usually like to carry a pen and paper (folded in my pocket), I've written in several locations and situations, including conferences, meetings, nature trails, family reunions, theaters, restaurants, playgrounds (with my boys), sporting events, etc. And while I don't encourage others to do this--because it's extremely dangerous (for yourself and others)--I write when I'm driving. Basically, I write almost anywhere and everywhere. No excuses about time or location.

If you really want to write, I'm sure you're always ready and able to do the same.

 


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# Monday, March 23, 2009
Skeltonic Poetry: Short, sweet and fun
Posted by Robert

Skeltonic verse is named after the poet John Skelton (1460-1529), who wrote short rhyming lines that just sort of go on from one rhyme to the next for however long you wish to take it. Most skeltonic poems average less than six words a line, but keeping the short rhymes moving down the page is the real key to this form.

Here's my attempt at one:

"My weekend with Tammy"

We perused
all the shoes
in Syracuse
and then cut my hair
until little was there,
and everyone stared,
though I didn't care--
more focused on wining
and elegant dining
with Tammy opining
she'd rather go mining
in the mountains for coal;
so we had a new goal,
but somebody stole
our beautiful car
delivered from Mars
(made from old stars
after the alien wars);
instead, we decided to sit
and not throw a fit
or pout or spit
(our plan already quit)
at the crowded park
where we waited 'til dark
for the invisible balloon
to carry us soon
to the crescent moon
where we'll live until June.

 


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Monday, March 23, 2009 2:36:29 PM (GMT Standard Time, UTC+00:00)  #  Comments [23] 
Some poetic forms (updated list)
Posted by Robert

In anticipation of National Poetry Month, here are some poetic forms to investigate and/or play with. I know forms can seem a little intimidating for some, but they can often lead you to unexpected destinations with your writing.

I hope you have fun playing around with these forms. My personal faves are the triolet, sestina and shadorma.


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# Friday, March 20, 2009
Announcing the Guest Judges for the April PAD Challenge eBook!
Posted by Robert

So I'm excited that some of our April PAD Challenge participants will have a chance to be featured in a well-designed eBook. The purpose of this project is not to exclude participants but to shine light on some of the very good poetry that happens on this blog in April. If you were here last year, you know what I mean.

Well, here's how the April PAD Challenge eBook is going to work. I'm going to make the deadline for consideration at midnight on April 30 (whether you're posting a poem to Day 1, Day 30, or sometime between). At that point, I'm going to go through each day (possibly with the help of my amazingly awesome wife and poet, Tammy) and select a Top 5 for each day.

(Note: As you know, a Top 5 in poetry is very, very subjective. And if this year is anything like last year, there is bound to be a ton of great poems each and every day. So please don't have any bruised feelings if you're not in this group.)

So, I choose a Top 5 each day. 5 poems per day X 30 days = 150 poems, right? But only the Top 50 poems during the month will appear in the eBook. And this is how we'll narrow it down:

* I'll be passing a group of Top 5 poems for each day to a guest judge (list below). That guest judge will pick a favorite from the Top 5 list to be the top of the day. So that'll take care of 30 of the 50 poems.

* I'll then pick out 20 from the 120 remaining poems. That'll get us to 50 poems.

Last year, more than 400 poets submitted more than 4,000 poems. So I definitely want y'all to know just how exceptional these 50 poems poems will be. And that those who are selected should feel proud, and those who aren't should feel just as good about themselves.

Apart from making it into the eBook, all those who complete the April PAD Challenge this year should receive a certificate of completion and badge for their websites/blogs (as we did last year). Plus, you should be able to make plenty of new friends (as we did last year).

So, here's the very distinguished list of judges (who are all volunteering their time and effort to the cause for free):

* Seth Abramson
* Sandra Beasley
* Shaindel Beers
* Mary Biddinger
* Jericho Brown
* Edward Byrne
* Sage Cohen
* J.P. Dancing Bear
* Jim Daniels
* Mark Doty
* Annie Finch
* Nick Flynn
* Jeannine Hall Gailey
* Guy LeCharles Gonzalez
* Vince Gotera
* S.A. Griffin
* Tom C. Hunley
* Collin Kelley
* Amy King
* Dorianne Laux
* Alex Lemon
* Reb Livingston
* Diane Lockward
* Marilyn Nelson
* Aimee Nezhukumatathil
* Chad Prevost
* Don Share
* Martha Silano
* Patricia Smith
* Anne Tardos

If I were running a literary journal, I would be overwhelmed with joy to have these fine poets published within my pages. To have them volunteering their time to help us out here is a great honor. (And if you want to learn more about them, just click on their names above.)

I won't be revealing which days they're going to judge (even to the judges themselves) until after the April 30 midnight deadline. I have several reasons for this--not least among them that I want poets to focus on writing a poem-a-day in April (as opposed to writing only on particular days). Hey, I'll be writing every day; you should, too, right?

Anyway, I'm super excited, and I hope you are as well.

 


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# Wednesday, March 18, 2009
Wednesday Poetry Prompts: 041
Posted by Robert

I read this story off CNN this morning: http://www.cnn.com/2009/TECH/space/03/18/bat.shuttle/index.html.

Talk about weird. For those who need a quick re-cap: A bat was seen hitching a ride into outer space on a space shuttle. So, a bat stowaway. Of course, part of me thought, what a poor bat. But then, this being Wednesday and all, another part thought, what a cool prompt!

Now before you get too excited (or outraged), the prompt is NOT to write a poem about a bat burning up in the atmosphere. No, I want you to write a poem about something that does not belong. Can be about a person, an animal, an inanimate object--whatever.

Here's my attempt for the day:

"Recess"

He balances along the outline of the playground
trying not to tip too far to the left or right.

He talks to himself about Megatron and Star
Wars. Optimus Prime and Luke Skywalker team up

to defend the galaxy. Meanwhile, the other boys
and girls play tag and four-square. He barely notices

what's happening on Earth. After all, it's just one
of many inhabitable planets within

the universe. Anyway, when he's not in space,
he's digging away at the earth, searching for ants,

snakes, and other creepy crawlies. The other kids
continue their games without notice. Every

once in a while, one may make a comment. But that's
okay, because he's just searching for his own space.

 


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# Sunday, March 15, 2009
Poets Helping Poets: What comes first? Poem or collection?
Posted by Robert

I've received differing answers from poets over the past year about what comes first when putting a collection together. Do they settle on a theme and write poems to fit the theme? Or do they write individual poems and then try to fit them together? Some poets say they do it one way; some the other; some do both (also known as the By-Any-Means-Necessary Method).

Anyway, I asked the Poetic Asides group on Facebook, and once again, so many great answers piled in that I couldn't use them all.

*****

I worry about the book element after the poems are written. Assembling poems for a collection means trying to get a thread running through them that helps them to connect to each other, or lean on other for meaning and content.

 

Of course, it's easier if you have sequences of poems: their running order is easier to organise, because they have a cohering quality that allows them to stand alone. But you still have the problem of what you put beforehand and what comes afterwards - because the outside poems have to be able to stand up to those sequences: not be overshadowed by the strength of the coherance of that sequence.

 

Barbara Smith

 

*****

 

I have done both. Generally I just write and then something evolves.

 

David Fraser

 

*****

 

Ordering the Storm is a collection of essays by respectable poets on that very topic. I recommend people check it out. Everyone tells you to front load and back load to wow the judges in contests and that's what I did with my first book. When I learned the book was invited to be in the VQR Poetry Series and no longer needed to pass the screen test, I reorganized the first half drastically. Now the poems form a progression and, I'd like to believe, the voice and narrative thread each together collectively.

 

Allen Braden

 

*****

 

My first collection, You Beckon, was put together from the poems written over an extended period of time. So the poems dictated the collection. It was amazing how once the process began it seemed to take on a life all its own and every poem seemed to find its exact perfect spot.

 

Peggy Eldridge-Love

 

*****

 

Charles Olson once told Ed Dorn something like, “If you study one thing deeply, you will learn everything.” Some of the premises being that everything is connected and that extreme concentration will enable you to think as the subject thinks. Dorn followed Olson’s advice and ended up with the great collection of poems called Gunslinger.

 

I learned about studying one thing before I knew of Olson telling that to Dorn. After I read what Olson told Dorn, I followed the advice more passionately. But for me it’s a bit different. Yes, I can see the interconnectedness of things, and the focus of studying one thing presents an amazing clarity of a sustained thinking process. But for me, as I said, it’s a bit different. For me, it’s about sustaining energy and imagination.

 

I’ve seven collections of poetry, three of which are published and one is forthcoming. They are all tightly themed. And that is because I stuck to the topic. The topic, for me, creates the energy to write. The topic continually stimulates my imagination. The topic is the muse. And I chase the muse whenever and wherever I can until I’m tired. In this last book, it was about 80 poems over a year until I was tired. I imagine I will pick it up again, because the content does seem endless.

 

But here’s the point: the theme/topic is the sustenance of my writing. And once it is gone, so is the writing.

 

Plus, I’m stubborn. While composing this most recent book, I wouldn’t write any poems that didn’t relate to the topic. The same is true of the other books. I wouldn’t veer. One book revolved around cosmology and particle physics and took about four or five years to write. One book fed off the energies of a Lorca poem for about five years. One book fed off a self-created writing assignment for about a month, and then revisions. One lasted for about a half year as I created a world where time moves backwards. One lasted about three or four years as I created a new mythology. One lasted about a year as I was proclaiming love. And this last one lasted about year, though really nineteen or twenty, and I still think there is another five years in it.

 

So, yeah. I compose by theme. Theme motivates, focuses, and stimulates me. Theme creates visions. Theme is the thing that let’s me confront the big issues, like love, death, and time, but indirectly, which is the only way one can confront those big topics today.

 

Theme gives me purpose.

 

Tom Holmes

 

*****

 

For me, the idea of a collection comes from a small selection of poems already written -- poems which, when looking back on them (ie to find places to submit them to etc) have a similar voice or touch on complementary themes. My poetry play, "Dreams of May," very much developed from the realization that I had created a character via my poems. But now, I am working on a collection that is more theme driven, and although it is starting from some previously written and published poems, it is continuing with new ones I am writing with that theme in mind. Otherwise, I suppose the answer to your question is "yes, all of the above"

 

Sue Guiney

 

*****

 

I have a chapbook (published) and two full size manuscripts. I put them all together with poems I had written already. It's the following my passion approach.

 

I'm keeping this email short. I don't know how people decide what they are going to write about and then create a book. Lots of poets do this, but I have to write what comes and then after I have a few hundred poems see what it looks like and begin to put it together. As I send out my current manuscripts I revise and continually rework poems. I am now getting edit feedback, new eyes to look at my two full size manuscripts in process, to see if I can edit them to a better book. I'd like my next publication to be a full size, but I also have chapbook sizes circulating. One chapbook was recently a finalist but didn't quite make it.

 

Julene Tripp Weaver

 

*****

 

Generally I write poems one at a time and later see how I can arrange them. But in all honesty, I find assembling a collection much harder than writing a poem, primarily because I feel there’s a contradiction between something being a "collection" and expecting to find in it a necessary sequence. This need for sequence or cohesion seems to be a variation on the insistence for narrative, which I don't really have an interest in. So I find myself torn between a cohesion so obvious it borders on monotony and a cohesion so subtle I can't imagine anyone else perceiving it. At this point I tend to throw up my hands and say, they are related because they all came from the same mind, it's inescapable. They're like a series of stepping stones; their relationship is simply that they all happen to be in the same river.

 

Two poets come to mind pondering this topic: Richard Wilbur and Louise Gluck. I remember Wilbur being asked how he assembled his collections and he said, essentially, that he didn't give it much thought. It was a collection. I envied his insouciance, since now, it seems, publishers expect thematic progression in poetry collections. To that end, Louise Gluck's collection, "Wild Iris," which won the Pulitzer, always struck me as great in its thematic cohesion, in its progressive development, but weak in its individual poems. I remember thinking after reading it, I would rather my individual poems be great though my collection lacked thematic cohesion.

 

Michael T. Young

 

*****

 

I've had two collections - one pamphlet and one full. In both cases I arranged the poems after they had been written. I didn't have an idea of how the final collections would look as I didn't know that they would be published. I'm still writing about whatever presents itself.

 

Maggie Sawkins

 

*****

 

I do both really. I have a couple of themes I like to write about, but I also write one-offs that have nothing to do with anything!

 

Paul De La Plante

 

*****

 

I do it both ways. That's the short answer.

 

Pris Campbell

 

*****

 

Ever since I began to really consciously develop my own poetics I have written with the design of the complete book in mind. Perhaps this is a Mallarme influence. For Mallarme, there is only one cosmic book, and each book is merely a reading or commentary on "the one true text"... and which, I imagine, is written in an ideal language (something like Benjamin's Messianic language perhaps, and hence, ultimately a language we no longer understand). I wrote a book length poem over a period of ten years, and then for the past ten years have written books usually composed of two or more long hybrid sequences.

 

Eric Selland

 

*****

 

It really does depend on the muse I think. For example, I'm currently finishing one manuscript and editing two that were done all at once on the same theme. As one thought led into the next so did each poem BUT I'm also editing four other manuscripts that are collections on a theme scattered across years (up to a decade). If the theme is one, I'm more inclined to I obviously write more of it than any other and will do that one in succession more readily (and the same goes for if the theme is a certain format ie sonnet, free verse, prose, etc).

 

Ronda Wicks Eller

 

*****

 

It is quite difficult to explain. I work mostly from a feeling, almost never from an idea. I say that I am always writing the same and endless poem. I meet the poems once written. What prevails is the intuition. There are exceptions: I once worked as a title or subject, with some success or not. I remember a book from the letters of Rimbaud in Africa. This project survived two or three poems that I included in a book.

 

Carlos Barbarito

 

*****

 

Both. Sometimes one way, sometimes the other, and sometimes both at the same time. Right now I'm working in a fully conceptualized project, but the last one had a coherent section that took up about a third of the book, with the rest taken from work done over the same two years.

 

Christopher Flynn

 

*****

 

I make collections after I've written the poems. To start out with an idea about a collection would shape my creative process differently than allowing myself to write each day with whatever is in front of me that prompts a poetic response (and I do write every morning, so this is not a discipline question). This way, I find that threads in my work that surprise me and keep me interested. This is not to say that I would be opposed to trying it the other way around in the future.

 

Kathleen Cassen Mickelson

 

*****

 

I do it both ways, depending on how the poems come to me. I am but the slave of the muse!

 

Jeffrey Spahr-Summers

 

*****

 

I've only done one chap/collection called Book of Aliases.  I wanted to get readership on my old poems so I went through my blog archives and picked what I thought were some of the best and strongest.  I had a huge amount of them and they were all over the place in terms of themes.  As I was trying to sort them into piles I realized that one of the interesting things I had been considering in my writing was the idea that we all are constantly shifting from one presentation of ourselves to another -- something similar to having several aliases.  Once I had that as a concept for a collection, I was able to pick 57 of my older poems that could be grouped under that theme and the book became easy to assemble. 

 

Russell Ragsdale

 

*****

 

Most of the poetry I write tends to be the quirky, offbeat, humorous kind.  After a number of my pieces were published in journals, I started working with an idea about how I'd like to organize them and finally did it in my first poetry book (and first book, too) Mugging for the Camera.  I found it was a lot easier to work with a central theme of an idea, even if it was kind of loosely based.

 

RJ Clarken

 

*****

 

I look to see what I've been writing for the last 2 years, decide whether it's a subject or a tone or what, and then include and exclude to make a unified whole.

 

Then I throw all the poems on the floor, arrange them into three piles or sections, and arrange the poems within the sections.  I have never written a poem FOR a collection, but I know many fine poets who do.

 

I'm talking about collections of individual poems, of course.  My three book-length verse narratives have stories to organize them.

 

 

Penelope Scambly Schott

 


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