# Sunday, September 30, 2007
Last day of September
Posted by Robert

Today is my last chance to update you on what I've been up to recently in September.

First, check out the most recent edition of my Faulty Mindbomb project. This edition features the poem "After a drink at the Tavern," by Caili Wilk.

Go to: http://faultymindbomb.blogspot.com/2007/09/fmb0030.html

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Second, I recently submitted some poems to the Atlanta Review. I'm always very pumped when I'm able to fit in a little time to get some kind of submission action going.

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Third, I'm getting some poems together to submit to a chapbook competition for Ohio poets. Almost done putting the final touches on that, and I think I've got until the end of October to send it in. Good stuff.

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Anyway, thought I'd let you know what I've been up to, though wish there was a bit more to report. :)

 


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Sunday, September 30, 2007 6:57:13 AM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Friday, September 28, 2007
Friday SPAM poetry prompt #928
Posted by Nancy

SPAM prompt line: Mrs. Brown has never given an interview about her family.

 

If you have a curious nature (and it certainly helps to have one if you're a writer), this prompt line should raise a flurry of questions on sight. Who is this Mrs. Brown? What is her family like? Why would there be any notion of her "giving an interview" in the first place--how many mothers are contacted for interviews, even in this media-rich age? Why has she never given an interview (i.e., did she refuse when asked)? Who's asking her to do so, and why?

 

Or maybe the point here is, Mrs. Brown is too common, too uninteresting for anyone to care about an interview involving her and her brood. How uninteresting is her life--what else has she never done? How has it shaped her (or not)? Is she as neutral as her name suggests?

 

You have a lot of options with this prompt. You don't have to have literally known a "Mrs. Brown" by name; she can be someone you'd like to examine through the viewfinder created by the prompt line. Or you can create a character based on the answers you provide to the questions this prompt line inspires.

 

You can even make the poem about you, i.e., "I've never given an interview about my family." Are you glad, sorry, relieved you haven't? Would you like to? What would you say? What might you reveal that your family would rather you kept quiet about? You could also take the "I've never...but I have..." approach.

 

You can also use first person to write a persona poem.

 

Lots of possibilities.  Happy writing!

 

--Nancy 

 

P.S. Often SPAM subject lines lift directly from news stories, so this line may refer to an actual interview with an actual person. For all I know, it's taken from a story about the mother of Nicole Brown Simpson. If you're really the curious sort, you could Google it and find out.

 

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Friday, September 28, 2007 7:26:34 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [1] 
Should Poets And Politics Mix, Part Two
Posted by Robert

If you're interested in part one, click here.

While "Professor publishes April 16 poem," by Liza Roesch for the Collegiate Times, might sound mundane enough, it actually explores the idea of whether poetry and politics (and current events, for that matter) should mix.

The article is about Bob Hicok and a poem he published in the September/October issue of American Poetry Review called "So I know." It is a confessional poem from Hicok about his guilt for not doing more to prevent the April 16, 2007, Virginia Tech shootings brought about by one of his former students, Seung-Hui Cho.

Click here to read Hicok's poem "So I know."

In it, Hicok addresses why he's written and attempted to publish the poem: "too soon/people will say, so what. This is what I do."

And Hicok definitely has a point.

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Friday, September 28, 2007 5:53:54 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
Translating Poetry: Is it worth it?
Posted by Robert

Thank you to Therese Walsh from Writer Unboxed for forwarding this piece over to me!

"Translating poetry opens up new worlds of language," by Carol Rumens for Guardian Unlimited, attempts to answer the hypothetical question posed in the subject line: Is there value in translating poetry?

As Rumens mentions in the article, a perfect replication is never possible, but very interesting "new poems" emerge from the collaborative effort of translation.

For instance, click here to see multiple translations of Matsuo Basho's famous frog haiku. It's very interesting to see how even the smallest set of words can be viewed so differently. And that's beauty of translating poetry.

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Friday, September 28, 2007 3:22:36 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Thursday, September 27, 2007
List Poem: A Surprisingly American Poem
Posted by Robert

Of course, I don't mean to say that the list poem was founded in America--far from it. The list poem was used by the Greeks and in many books of the Bible. But two of the most popular American poems, Walt Whitman's "Song of Myself" and Allen Ginsberg's "Howl," are list poems. So what is a list poem?

Basically, a list poem (also known as a catalog poem) is a poem that lists things, whether names, places, actions, thoughts, images, etc. It's a very flexible and fun form to work with.

For instance, I've written a list poem below to describe the experience of watching my high school football team for four years (and maybe that many wins over the entire period). Our team mascot, the Pirate, is clearly visible from I-75 if you're ever driving between Dayton and Cincinnati. We have a large set of bleachers and even this really cool wood pirate ship with a canon for when we score (sadly, underused most seasons). You would think we'd have some sort of great football team, but:

"Watching the Pirates"

We watched them lose every Friday;
first, they lost to the Beavers;
second, they fell to the Vikings;
third, they were knocked off by Elks;
fourth, the Green Wave swept over them;
fifth, the Trojans had their way;
sixth, they succumbed to Spartans;
seventh, the Skyhawks flew to victory;
eight, the Rams clobbered them;
ninth, it was the Golden Knights;
in the tenth week, they finally won,
but no one was there to see it.

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Thursday, September 27, 2007 7:58:29 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Wednesday, September 26, 2007
A lot of poetry news to report today...
Posted by Robert

Some days just seem to bring more news than others. Maybe it's the shifting of the seasons.

"Arab poetry's sometimes subversive answer to 'American Idol,'" by Saifedean Ammous for The Electronic Intifada, examines the success of a televised poetry contest named Prince of Poets. Ammous: "Perhaps the only thing that is as hard as translating Arab poetry to other languages is trying to explain to non-Arabs the extent of poetry's popularity, importance and Arab's strong attachment to it."

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"A new direction for the New Yorker," by Robert Potts for Guardian Unlimited, offers another take on Paul Muldoon's recent appointment as Poetry Editor at The New Yorker.

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"Poetry award increases prize pot," by Anna Richardson for Bookseller.com, reports the T.S. Eliot Prize for Poetry has increased the prize money awarded to make it the largest cash prize in British poetry.

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Wednesday, September 26, 2007 10:08:23 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Monday, September 24, 2007
Nobody Ever Buys Poetry--Ever
Posted by Robert

Okay, so maybe that's not technically correct. For instance, I buy new poetry collections about once a week. And I know poets who purchase collections of poetry on a regular basis. People do buy poetry, but it's not easy finding a good selection of poetry to buy.

There's a chicken and egg problem with poetry collections in the marketplace. Booksellers don't stock too much poetry, because poetry doesn't sell well. Potential poetry buyers don't buy poetry, because there's not a good selection (or sometimes, in my personal experience, I've had trouble even finding a poetry section in bookstores).

Would poetry sell better if it had more shelf space? I'm not sure we'll ever know, because it doesn't make good business sense for bookstores to take a chance on poetry. I don't agree with it, but that's how the bottom line works.

"Local poetry publisher BOA rises to national status," by Matthew Daneman for Rochester Democrat and Chronicle, profiles prominent poetry publisher BOA. Of particular interest, BOA estimates 43% of its revenue comes from book sales and 37% from grants and donations--illustrating just how hard it is to sell poetry.

Despite this despicable state of the poetry publishing industry, I feel very certain that poetry will never die. Readers do go out of their way to find poetry in the nooks and crannies of bookstores and flea markets and Web sites and anywhere they can find it, because those who read poetry are passionate about poetry.

So anyway, I just sometimes get discouraged about the lack of shelf space devoted to poetry. I'm sure other poets do too. However, I just want to remind everyone (myself included) that we don't write poetry for the money or fame; we write poetry, because we can't stop ourselves. What's wrong with us anyway? (Just kidding, I think.)

 


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Monday, September 24, 2007 6:55:20 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [6] 
I'm Excited About Rejection!
Posted by Robert

On Saturday, I received two rejections in the mail. And I was actually pumped up after reading them.

Really, the first one from Asheville Poetry Review is the one that got me excited. While I could see it was a form rejection letter, there was a handwritten note at the bottom from the editor Keith Flynn:

"Robert,

It was nice to see you in NYC--sorry this isn't better news, but 'Pride Park' did make it to our final cut--thanks for your interest and keep pushing.

All best,

Keith"

And when I looked at my returned poems, the one Keith mentioned had been marked a few times with his signature. So, naturally, there was a part of me that was bummed about coming so close, but then there was another part of me that was excited to make it to the final cut in a journal that publishes a lot of poets I read in those annual Best American Poetry anthologies.

To emphasize the point, my rejection from The Sun had no special note--just a form rejection letter on a small piece of paper.

So yeah, "Pride Park" is definitely going out again soonish, and I'm excited to ramp up my submission efforts for the final 3 months of the year!

 


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Monday, September 24, 2007 2:54:48 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Friday, September 21, 2007
My Brother Is Engaged & Other News
Posted by Robert

I know this has nothing to do with poetry, but as the oldest brother in my family unit, I was excited to learn that my brother proposed to his long-time girlfriend today, and (drum roll) she said, "Yes."

Great news! I was excited. Had to share.

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In other (personal) news, I released a new edition of Faulty Mindbomb at http://faultymindbomb.blogspot.com/2007/09/fmb0029.html. Be sure to check out Linda Benninghoff's poem "Easter" (yes, in September--I'm a little slow, okay).

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Have a great weekend!


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Friday, September 21, 2007 9:42:31 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
Friday SPAM Poetry Prompt #921
Posted by Nancy

SPAM prompt line: Are you confident in bed?

 

For some reason, every time I read this line, I start hearing "Do Your Ears Hang Low?" in my head for the next two hours.

 

So why not run with it? First approach: Use this as the first line in a poem modeled after a stanza of "Do Your Ears Hang Low?" (You can see the lyrics here and here if you need a model for the rhyme scheme.) You can let that one stanza stand as your poem, or you can move on to additional stanzas just as the song (and its parodies) do. You can explore the word "confidence" (i.e., "Are you confident at work?" "Are you confident in sports?" "Are you confident in love?") or you can focus on "bed," literally as a place to sleep or as a euphemism for sex ("Are you comfortable in bed?" "Are you really loud in bed?" "Are you vigorous in bed?")

 

Second approach: Ignore "Do Your Ears Hang Low?" (if you are able to now) and simply use the "Are you confident in bed?" line somewhere in the poem, or as inspiration for a poem about--well, you decide. Maybe it's not about "bed" at all, but an examination of self-doubt. Or maybe it will form the basis of your own commercial-in-verse on treatments for ED. Form and length are up to you.

 

Note: Yes, I'm aware that the tune is a variation of "Turkey in the Straw," which is supposed to be a variation of a blackface minstrel tune. I'm also aware that there are versions of "Do Your Ears Hang Low?" that focus on other parts of the anatomy. I know it inspired a hip-hop hit last year. I've also read online that the song was originally sung by Confederate soldiers about taking physical "mementos" from the bodies of runaway slaves and black Union soldiers; OR that the song originated in Spain during the post-World War I flu epidemic, and that medics sang the song to distract themselves as they put tags (i.e., like toe tags) in the ears of flu victims.

 

The pivotal word here is "originally." I haven't seen anything anywhere that confirms the veracity of the two latter stories as the actual origins of "Do Your Ears Hang Low?" Not that those stories might not be true, but I'd like to see some documentation besides blog posts that go viral. Since "Continental soldier" goes back to the American Revolutionary War, I suspect the song is at least that old, maybe older. If anyone has genuine evidence of the song's origins, please inform us in Comments. Thanks!

 

--Nancy

 

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Friday, September 21, 2007 9:23:28 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
Moves Made at The New Yorker
Posted by Nancy

"Pulitzer Winner to Take Over as New Yorker's Poetry Editor," by Motoko Rich for The New York Times, reports, "Alice Quinn, the poetry editor of The New Yorker, is stepping down after 20 years and will be succeeded in one of the most influential posts in the poetry world by Paul Muldoon, the Pulitzer Prize-winning poet."

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Friday, September 21, 2007 3:34:37 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Thursday, September 20, 2007
Fibonacci Poetry: A new poetic form!
Posted by Robert

Fibonacci poetry was founded by Gregory K. Pincus last year as a 6-line poem that follows the Fibonacci sequence for syllable count per line.

For the 6-line poem that means:

  • 1 syllable for first line
  • 1 syllable for second line
  • 2 syllables for third
  • 3 syllables for fourth
  • 5 syllables for fifth
  • 8 syllables for sixth

An example:

"Confession"

My
first
poem
was not a
Fibonacci or
even an unrhymed sestina.

There are variations where the Fibonacci expands even further with each line, but to understand how to accomplish this, you need to understand the Fibonacci math sequence of starting with 0 and 1 and then adding the last two numbers together to add to infinity.

0+1=1
1+1=2
1+2=3
2+3=5
3+5=8
5+8=13
8+13=21
13+21=34
and so on and so forth...

Anyway, those lines can easily get more and more unwieldy the more you let them expand.

Here's how my example might expand, for instance:

"A Longer Confession"

My
first
poem
was not a
Fibonacci or
even an unrhymed sestina;
my first poem was not a sonnet or triolet,
a ghazal or haiku; my first poem wasn't free form, either: I don't know what it was. 

Yeah, 21 syllables is a lot of syllables for one line. So, there's another variation that has taken flight in making Fibonacci poems that ascend and descend in syllables.

My tired example:

"A Bell Curve Confession"

My
first
poem
was not a
Fibonacci or
even an unrhymed sestina;
my first poem wasn't a sonnet,
triolet, ghazal,
haiku or
even
free
verse.

For poets who also like mathematics (am I the only one raising my hand?), this is definitely an interesting form to get your mind working.

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Here's more on the Fibonacci poem:

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Thursday, September 20, 2007 6:05:21 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [2] 
# Wednesday, September 19, 2007
180 Poems Free Online!
Posted by Robert

Stumbled across the Library of Congress Poetry 180 site that offers educators access to a poem a day through the school year. That's right: 180 poems by poets, such as Billy Collins, Thomas Lux, and Dorianne Laux.

While this is great for secondary ed students, it's also a wonderful resource for all lovers of poetry. Just go to http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/p180-list.html to check it out.

 


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Wednesday, September 19, 2007 9:47:34 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [2] 
LOTS of Poet's Market updates...
Posted by Nancy

Here are some changes to note in your copy of the 2008 edition of Poet's Market:

 

1) The e-mail addy in the Pennsylvania Poetry Society Annual Contest

    listing should be changed from pps_contest_chair@hotmail.com (now

    inactive) to paperlesspoetsonline@hotmail.com.

 

2) "I'm sorry to say, my journal eye is no more," writes editor Peter

    Schwartz. I'm adding eye to the "Closing Post 2008 Edition" list at the

    bottom here.

 

3) Lyric Poetry Review did not appear in the 2008 edition, but should have

    (another verification that went into an e-mail black hole). Submission

    guidelines are here. Additional update: Nathaniel Perry should now be

    listed as editor.

 

4) John Palattella, poetry editor for The Nation, writes:

Please note that as of 10 September, the guidelines for submitting poems to The Nation are as follows.

The Nation welcomes unsolicited poetry submissions. You may send up to three poems at a time, and no more than eight poems during a calendar year. Send poems by First-Class Mail, accompanied by a self-addressed, stamped envelope. The Nation does not read simultaneous submissions, nor can it reply to or return poems sent by fax or e-mail or submitted without an SASE. Manuscripts may be mailed to:

 

John Palattella

Poetry Editor

The Nation

33 Irving Place

New York, NY 10003

 

The submission guidelines are posted on The Nation's website.

5) Yemassee has new contact information: E-mail:

    editor@yemasseejournal.org. Website: www.yemasseejournal.org.

    Contact: Darien Cavanaugh and Jonathan Maricle, co-editors.

 

6) The Concrete Wolf Chapbook Press Contest did not appear in the 2008

    edition; however, we were later notified that their contact information has

    changed to: Address: P.O. Box 788, Kirkland WA 98083. E-mail:

    concretewolf@yahoo.com. Website: http://concretewolf.com. Contact:

    Lana Hechtman Ayers, editor/publisher.

 

7) Although Southern California Review didn't appear in the 2008 edition,

    Annlee Ellingson, editor-in-chief, notified us of lots of changes in contact

    information (note: also a change of title--formerly Southern California

    Anthology): Address: c/o Master of Professional Writing Program, 3501

    Trousdale Parkway, Mark Taper Hall, THH 355J, University of Southern

    California, Los Angeles CA 90089-0355. E-mail: scr@college.usc.edu.

    Website: www.usc.edu/dept/LAS/mpw/students/sca.php.

 

Special note: This post by Reb Livingston shows why small journals and presses and their editors are my heroes. Talk about dedication. Show your appreciation--buy a small press publication today! (Reb's magazine and press are not listed in Poet's Market; read her post--do NOT send her queries or manuscripts.)

 

--Nancy

 

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Wednesday, September 19, 2007 8:54:41 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
Shadorma: A highly addictive poetic form from Spain
Posted by Robert

I recently discovered a poetic form called shadorma (thanks to P.J. Nights via Tammy Trendle) that I had no record of in my two poetic form handbooks [kind of like my recent posting about hay(na)ku]. Shadorma is a Spanish 6-line syllabic poem of 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllable lines respectively. Simple as that.

Also, you can link multiple shadorma (shadormas? shadormae?) like in my example below:

"Miss Shadorma"

She throws birds
at the school children
on playgrounds
made of steel
who run intense spirals to
the chain-link fencing.

Sad teachers
watch as they spiral
into air
like reverse
helicopter seeds searching
for their maple trees.

I've found myself addicted to writing in this shadorma form. It's simple and has a nice ebb and flow to the lines. Very fun!

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Wednesday, September 19, 2007 2:20:27 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [2] 
# Tuesday, September 18, 2007
Poet Tess Gallagher speaks on power of poetry
Posted by Robert

Found an interesting interview with Tess Gallagher in Scotland's Sunday Herald. "Tess Gallagher: living proof of the power of poetry," by Alan Taylor, looks at Gallagher's ability to overcome an abusive childhood, many close deaths, and cancer to write her poetry.

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Tuesday, September 18, 2007 3:42:55 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Monday, September 17, 2007
Hay(na)ku: Counting up a new poetic form
Posted by Robert

Hay(na)ku is a very simple poetic form, and it's also one of the newest. It was apparently created in 2003 by poet Eileen Tabios.

Hay(na)ku is a 3-line poem with one word in the first line, two words in the second, and three in the third. There are no restrictions beyond this.

A really basic example:

Boys
chase girls
on the playground.

There are already some variations of this new poetic form. For instance, a reverse hay(na)ku has lines of three, two, and one word(s) for lines one, two, and three respectively. Also, multiple hay(na)ku can be chained together to form longer poems.

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Here are some links to other hay(na)ku sites:

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Monday, September 17, 2007 3:27:51 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [1] 
# Sunday, September 16, 2007
Late Night/Early Morning Sick Poetry
Posted by Robert

Good evening/morning (depending on your Saturday night party attitude)!

For me, it is early, early morning. I've been attacked by a cold all weekend and am having trouble with that sleeping thing I try to do every night. I took my Nyquil, and I've stayed hydrated--hopefully, soon my eyes will get sleepy from typing this post (fingers crossed).

Anyway, I usually find myself writing weird, nonsensical poetry at this time of the night/morning when I'm sick. In fact, I was guilty of such stuff again just minutes ago. Writers write--even when they're sick.

I'm usually not happy with the writing later on, because sometimes it doesn't even make sense to me. But I think writing while I'm sick helps me get through the illness and still feel semi-productive. I think the writing can even act as a distraction, at times, from the discomfort my body is feeling.

Not sure that I have a point with this post--just sharing some of my experience as a poet.

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Also, I don't want to be a tease about the bad stuff I write when I'm up early/late and sick. Though I'll probably regret it later, I'm going to share some of what I've written just minutes earlier. For context, I took my boys to two different festivals Saturday (Ohio is filled with them this time of year). We did hit up the Preble County Pork Festival parade. Woo-hoo!

candy kids collect
scraps from the street
shove them in bags
and accept stickers
from every political
candidate who wants
their parents' votes

candy kids cover
their ears when bands
march through with drums
counting off steps
to the county festival

candy kids covet
time to enjoy
their sweet treasures
and want pop and
balloons and toys
and everything

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p.s. As you tear apart the writing above, please keep in mind that it is only a draft. Also, I'm sick and medicated.

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p.p.s. Hope everyone's sleeping better than me! :)

 


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Sunday, September 16, 2007 9:09:43 AM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [2] 
# Saturday, September 15, 2007
Friday SPAM poetry prompt #914
Posted by Nancy

SPAM prompt line: There are three occasions during the year when you can…

 

I never clicked on the e-mail that accompanied this line to see what you could do on those three occasions--or to find out what the occasions were. Considering the nature of most SPAM, I didn't really want to know.

 

So it's up to you to decide.  What are the three occasions--and what are you able or permitted to do? You can start with the occasions and make a list (holidays, anniversaries, birthdays, third Friday of every month--start with the obvious and then stretch out with your imagination, these don't have to be the same type of occasion each time); or you can start with whatever it is you can do (kiss a stranger, cheat the government, do the Snoopy joy dance, call in to work sick without being sick--it's totally wide open, make a long list). Or you can do the old "repeat the statement" approach, i.e., write "There are three occasions during the year when you can…" over and over, with a different finish each time.

 

Once you settle on the occasions and what you can do, carry on with your poem and see where it takes you.

 

Happy writing!

 

--Nancy

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Saturday, September 15, 2007 4:54:42 AM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Friday, September 14, 2007
I'm featured on Writer Unboxed
Posted by Robert

That's right! Check out an interview with me, Robert Lee Brewer, editor of Writer's Market and blogger-extraordinaire at http://writerunboxed.com/2007/09/14/interview-robert-brewer/.

Thank you, Therese Walsh, for the opportunity!

 


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Friday, September 14, 2007 8:21:18 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
I could use some cheering up, let's stop by the Merry Cemetery...
Posted by Nancy

Did you see our recent discussions of epitaphs here and here? There's a place that takes poems-on-tombstones a step further--the Cimitirul Vesel ("Merry Cemetery") of Sapanta, Romania. Poets in the funeral business: an overlooked opportunity?

 

And yes, I'd like my tombstone to make people laugh. (Thanks to The Poetry Hut for the original link to this story.)

 

--Nancy


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Friday, September 14, 2007 5:01:09 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
Recently in the Poet's Market newsletter...
Posted by Nancy

If you don't subscribe to the Poet's Market e-newsletter (go here for free subscription sign-up), you missed the following about online poetry groups:

 

The new 2008 Poet's Market includes an Insider Report by Donya Dickerson called "Online Poetry Forums: A new community for poets." Donya contacted two successful sites--The Poet Sanctuary and Wild Poetry Forum--and spoke with participants about their experiences in the poetry forum community.

 

Addressing the benefits of belonging to an online poetry group, M of Wild Poetry Forum says:

"I suppose the primary attraction of poetry forums, no matter the poet's individual goal, is the ability to receive immediate exposure, feedback and critique of writing from other experienced authors. Some of our members write as an emotional outlet or hobby and simply wish to share their writing and their thoughts with other like-minded souls. Other members are published professionals, or hope to be published one day, and are more concerned with the technical aspects of improving their writing skills."

For more on the value of online poetry communities, the kind of criticism poets receive, and how to find a forum that's right for you, see "Online Poetry Forums" in the 2008 Poet's Market.

 

--Nancy

 

The Poet's Market e-newsletter is sent twice per month; next edition goes out on September 21. Subscribe today!

 


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Friday, September 14, 2007 4:14:20 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
# Thursday, September 13, 2007
Computer Poetry and the Renaissance
Posted by Robert

"Renaissance served cause of poetry well," by Michael Hickey for Naples Sun Times, gives a brief overview of the Renaissance and poetry.

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"Computer Poetry Pushes the Envelope," from Science Daily, asks, "What happens to poetry in the Digital Age?" Swedish researcher Maria Engberg: "The way digital poetry experiments with language raises questions and challenges conceptions of literature that were formed by printed books."

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Thursday, September 13, 2007 5:40:27 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #  Comments [0] 
It's that time of the year again
Posted by Robert

As a runner, I love this time of the year. The temperatures are starting to cool off. The air always seems a little fresher. (Is it possible to have a fresh smog alert?) And soon, the foliage will be turning brilliant colors to contrast with the usual bright blue autumn sky.

As a poet, I love this time of the year for a different reason: This is when the university-run literary journals typically open up their submission reading periods. While reading periods change from journal to journal, most open up around the beginning of September and run through the end of April.

So the time is perfect for both running and submitting here in Southwest Ohio. I've got a new pair of running shoes and a copy of 2008 Poet's Market (edited by my blogging cohort, Nancy Breen). I love this time of year!

 


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# Wednesday, September 12, 2007
Following up on Haiku on September 11
Posted by Robert

I don't know if you had a chance to read it, but Nancy's post "Haiku on September 11" was really something worth reading and pondering.

While scouring the Net this morning, I found "In wake of 9/11, poetry helps lift us out of suffering," by North Carolina poet laureate Kathryn Stripling Byer. In the piece, she examines what poetry can accomplish in the midst of disaster.

 


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# Tuesday, September 11, 2007
Haiku on September 11
Posted by Nancy

I read Robert's posts about haiku here and here, as well as Michael Dylan Welch's comments, with great interest. I've tried haiku in the past, knew I failed, and have also felt "fearful" about trying again. I'm intrigued by everything that goes into writing a true haiku, including saying more with less.

 

In e-mailing back and forth about an article for the 2009 Poet's Market, Michael and I discussed this fear a bit. I promised Michael I would seriously attempt haiku and post a few here at Poetic Asides.

 

I realized there was no more challenging subject about which to say more with less than the anniversary of the 9/11 attacks. I experienced September 11, 2001 in a very peripheral way--literally. That morning my mother and I were in Gettysburg, having spent the night en route to a few days in Amish country. We were actually blissfully unaware of the attacks as we searched for Marianne Moore's grave in Evergreen Cemetery and contemplated the beautiful, peaceful scene in the Valley of Death from Little Round Top.

 

It wasn't until we stopped at an antique mall halfway to York that we first heard what had happened. In shock, we immediately started back to Ohio. With Washington so close to the south, there was a special urgency in the radio reports we were listening to. In one of the rest stations on the Pennsylvania Turnpike, we overheard plenty of discussion of the New York part of the tragedy, as people wandered with cell phones to their ears, absorbed in agitated conversations, their eyes wide with fear and confusion.

 

And, as we sped through Somerset County within miles of Shanksville, we passed emergency equipment heading east, lights flashing, although Flight 93 had gone down hours before.

 

In 2002, on our way home from the Dodge Poetry Festival, we made a detour off the turnpike to visit the Flight 93 memorial. It was only a year and week later; a mood of requiem was still strong--at the festival, in the small towns of New Jersey, and in Pennsylvania.

 

It's definitely a challenge to distill all that into captured moments; to forego the emotions, the intensity of the memories, the politics, the impulse to comment at length and memorialize. But I said I'd try, so here they are--my haiku for September 11 (attempted):

 

bone-white stones

the poet's grave eludes us

crow and dried roses

 

          ***

 

clear September day

a blue sky to remember

leaves papers ash drift

 

          ***

 

soft yellow showers

faint whiffs of distant smoke

crickets on stone walls

 

          ***

 

stillness on Round Top

in the cannon's muzzle

a spider's web

 

          ***

 

cows and goldenrod

a siren on the turnpike

milking time is soon

 

          ***

 

field in late summer

tributes on a chain-link fence

grass conceals the scars

 

--Nancy

 

P.S. Here's a moving piece about an artist's musical response to 9/11.


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# Saturday, September 08, 2007
Concrete Poems: Or Sculpting Poetry
Posted by Robert

Concrete poetry is one of the more experimental poetic forms available to poets. Concrete poems use space and sound to communicate the meanings of the words. Words can cover other words; and the poem has trouble standing without the structure. Concrete poetry is more visual than other poetic forms.

Of course, concrete poetry has plenty of detractors because of the weight structure has on the words, but as much thought goes into concrete poetry as any other form.

Here's an example:

"The 800"

We line up. We     wait    for   the  "set"
and then gunblastexplosionbangandwe'reoff
run
ni      ng
in        ou
rf            ir
st           ci
rc           le,
ou       rf
ir    st
lap,
but
th   er
ea       lr
ac         es
ta          rt
so          nt
he       se
co    nd
lap,
and                     
then    
we're                 
tumbling                     
   in
from            
              first
            to
last.                                   

As you can see from this example, taken from my days of running track & field, the structure gives the poem added weight and importance. Without the structure, this poem would just read:

"We line up. We wait for the 'set' and then gun blast explosion band and we're off running our first circle, our first lap, but the real race starts on the second lap, and then we're tumbling in from first to last."

In the concrete form, I was able to simulate the two laps that an 800 racer must run, which coincidentally forms a figure 8. Also, I can simulate the wait before the gun blast to start the race and the initial jumbled feeling of the start all the way through to the way each runner finishes in a different place "from first to last."

This form can be very fun to write. Of course, you'll need to think of subjects that open themselves up to a certain type of form. You could write a heart-shaped love poem, a scary jack-o-lantern poem. The sky really is the limit (or is it?).

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# Friday, September 07, 2007
Friday SPAM poetry prompt #907
Posted by Nancy

SPAM prompt line: Over 800 models

 

Maybe it's because it's "fashion week" in New York (which I only know because I heard David Letterman mention it), but this line jumped out at me. Ye gods, 800 models! That's an awful lot of bony knees and sharp elbows in one place.

 

Or maybe that's not the case at all. Who are these models? Where are they, and why are there so many of them? Is it the world's largest runway show? Some kind of protest? A convention or conference? Are they skinny fashion models or plus-size, or a bipartisan mix? Are they male or female? What are they wearing--or not wearing?

 

Write a poem about these 800 models. Give your imagination a workout; try to avoid the stereotypes regarding setting as well as people. The models could be children, although 800 child models sounds like a frightening kind of chaos. And yet, maybe that's your poem.

 

By the way, I was once in a children's fashion show. I think I was 11, and I wasn't fat yet. The show was at a PTA meeting in St. Cecilia's cafeteria--but we had a runway. A local children's clothing store we couldn't afford to shop in called the Pink Pixie provided the clothes. It was the first time a brush blush ever touched my cheeks, and I was fascinated. My mother and grandmothers either used cake rouge or simply dabbed a bit of their dark lipstick from their lips and massaged it onto their cheekbones. I was totally forgettable in my blue corduroy jumper, but my brother stole the show. A cute five-year-old in a sailor-like outfit, he toddled onto the runway with his finger in his mouth and captured the hearts of every mother there. We each got a pink balloon at the end of the runway, handed to us by a pair of teenage girls dressed as pixies--in green, which didn't seem consistent with their branding. We didn't get to keep the clothes.

 

Anyway...if you want an extra challenge, integrate the "over 800 models" phrase into one of the repeating lines in a villanelle.
 

Of course, maybe you imagine 800 models of cars, or 800 model planes, or 800 models of refrigerators or washers. If you want to take it in that direction instead, go right ahead. No one but you will ever know.

 

--Nancy

 

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Make Poetic Asides Your Friend...
Posted by Robert

...on MySpace!

I've created a Poetic Asides profile on MySpace and will be glad to befriend and communicate with all the readers of the Poetic Asides blog. While our blog entries will be handled here, I do realize that many people (myself included) would rather ask questions in a one-on-one setting. And I know y'all want to be friends with me.

If you have a MySpace profile already, just go to http://myspace.com/poeticasides and request me as a friend.

If you don't have a MySpace profile already, just go to http://myspace.com and create a new account (they're free and only take a few minutes). Then, go to http://myspace.com/poeticasides and request me as a friend.

Leave comments, send messages, have fun. 'Nuff said. :)

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O yeah, and have a great weekend!

 


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# Thursday, September 06, 2007
My Submission Process
Posted by Robert

Today, I received a nice rejection on some poems I submitted to Thieves Jargon. I also sent out a group of poems to Burnside Review. Since I went through the process of marking a submission and rejection on the same day, I got to thinking about how I submit poems, including how I keep everything organized. It's extremely lo-tech.

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This is how I organize my poems: I copy them by hand into those black & white marble composition notebooks. I number each page to help with referencing where each poem is.

I reserve around 10 pages of room at the end of each notebook to make submission notes for the entire book. Basically, I make four columns: Date of submission; where the submission went (for instance, Burnside Review today); which poems (I include poem titles and page number in the composition notebook); and the result (whether poems were accepted or rejected and the date of response).

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When I make a submission of poems, I mark the columns with the appropriate information in the back. But to ensure that I don't accidentally send the same poem out to several publications, I also create columns beside each poem that I cross-reference with the information in the back: Name of publication; date of submission; date of acceptance; and date of rejection.

If a poem has no response or has been accepted, then I know not to submit it elsewhere. If a poem's current status is rejected, then I know it's available to submit. If it's been rejected several times, I know there's a possibility it should be revised or abandoned.

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So, that's how I do it. Submitting multiple poems to multiple publications can be confusing. However, with this system, I've had no problems keeping on top of where my poems are.


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# Wednesday, September 05, 2007
Should Poets and Politics Mix?
Posted by Robert

"Stranded: Poet Mark Strand Preaches Political Indifference at UCI," by Victor D. Infante from About.com (reprinted from The Orange County Weekly), examines a comment made by Strand that poets should rise above politics in their poetry, as well as stating that rap and poetry share no connection.

Since I was not there to see the context of his answer, I cannot speak to Strand's specific quotes. However, I think it's difficult to separate poetry from music--whether verse/chorus/verse or rap songs. Slam poetry is definitely a poetic form and part of the poetry world, and there are many great slam poems that sound like rap without the "fat" beats. And many song lyrics read as free verse and/or metered poetry if you remove the accompanying music.

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Also, I'm conflicted about the politics and poetry not mixing idea. This is very dangerous--on both sides of the trenches.

On one side, poetry that is all politics can be more than a little preachy, which can alienate many readers--much like a door-to-door salesperson or that crazy guy who stands on soapboxes all day warning of the end of the world. You know, sometimes the message can kill the poem's effectiveness as a poem.

On the other side, poets who don't report the world as they see it do a disservice to their time and place, as well as the readers of their specific time and place. Avoiding politics can cause readers to feel displaced from the writing of the poet. Not every poem has to be timeless, after all. Neruda understood this when he tackled both the timely (politics) and timeless (love) topics.

And really the best poetry that I read tries to get at both the timely and timeless at the same time. It's that juxtaposition that really gets me jazzed up.

Of course, I'd love to hear others thoughts on this as well.

*****

(Also, apologies to Mark Strand for having this particular article singled out. I really don't know in what context he made various comments--so don't let this post affect your opinion of him. However, this article did get me thinking about some important issues we all face as poets. Strand is a great poet, and I suggest you read plenty of his work if you haven't already.)

 


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Hey, look--a contest at Writer Unboxed!
Posted by Nancy

The folks at Writer Unboxed (About the craft and business of genre fiction) are running a contest in which writers make up a word (or two or three) and post their creations in the comments for eventual judging. The prize is a complete set of 2008 writer's market directories, including Poet's Market.

 

Details are here; and if you're interested in genre fiction, take a look around this great site (which includes interviews with top-notch writers and publishing industry professionals; an interview with our own Robert Brewer--Writer's Market editor as well as poetry blogger--will be posted there soon).

 

--Nancy


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A market that's NOT closed: River Oak Review
Posted by Nancy

I've received an e-mail from Lance Wilcox, Associate Poetry Editor of River Oak Review. He discusses a situation I just hate to hear about--an editor returned a listing verification for the 2008 edition of Poet's Market, but somehow I never received it:

"I recently purchased the 2008 Poet's Market for my personal use and was surprised not to see our journal listed. When I mentioned it to Ann Frank Wake, our Poetry Editor, she was quite upset. She is sure she revised and submitted the necessary materials to update our listing in a timely manner…I know how conscientious she is, so I believe she did return the revised listing on time and the snafu occurred somewhere else."

Indeed, the snafu was probably the great junk mail filter "black hole" into which too much mail disappears. I searched through all my records and my electronic files of returned verifications, and I don't have anything for River Oak Review. I also review my long list of "blocked" e-mails each day, but I may have overlooked this verification at the time. I'm quite capable of making mistakes, and do.

 

Whatever the cause, River Oak Review didn't have a listing in the 2008 Poet's Market, and that doesn't make me happy. I value every listing and hate the long list of "NR" (no response) markets that appear in the General Index in each edition. Since I'm the only person working on the book, it's impossible for me to contact all these markets individually to see if they forgot to return their listing updates. I send out at least one, sometimes two follow-up mailings to markets I haven't heard from, but these are easily disregarded if an editor believes he/she already responded.

 

Please add River Oak Review to your list of potential markets (the submission guidelines are here). And believe me, River Oak Review will appear in the 2009 edition of Poet's Market.

 

--Nancy


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