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 Friday, April 27, 2007
Starting a Sentence With "But"
Q: So, BK, what about starting a sentence with "but"? Is there a rule for that? Because I do it all the time. But I really don't want to, if it's against the rules. It's just so hard to be good sometimes. —Amanda Joann Smith
A: I once covered this in the magazine and what I wrote then still rings true today, so I’m reposting it. (Oh, and it’s definitely hard to be good sometimes—especially when the world is full of bad grammar, run-on sentences and ice cream.) Many grammar buffs will slap you on the hand with a ruler for starting sentences with a conjunction—to them, placing the conjunction (but, and, yet, etc.) first creates a grammatically incomplete thought like a sentence fragment. But that doesn’t mean you can’t or shouldn’t do it. By Merriam-Webster’s definition, a conjunction joins together clauses, phrases, words or sentences (that’s right, sentences). Contrary to belief (and probably what your English teachers told you), there’s no definitive rule prohibiting writers from using this great device. A conjunction at the beginning of your sentence will tend to draw attention to itself and its transitional function, communicating certain points clearly and effectively. You should, however, consider a couple of things before going this route. Would the sentence function just as well without the conjunction opening? If so, don’t use it. Also, should the sentence simply be connected to the previous one? If the two ideas work better as a compound sentence, combine them. If an initial conjunction doesn’t really do anything to help you get across the point you’re trying to make, it’s best to bid it adieu. But it can sure come in handy sometimes. Brian A. Klems is the associate editor of Writer’s Digest magazine. Have a question for me? Feel free to post it in the comments section below or e-mail me at WritersDig@fwpubs.com with “Q&Q” in the subject line. Come back each Friday as I try to give you more insight into the writing life.
4/27/2007 8:19:23 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Friday, April 20, 2007
Article Black Holes
Q: I had submitted two stories to a nursing magazine after consulting the editor in advance. I was told the stories were accepted and one would appear in August. So far, no sign of my story, and when I tried to follow-up with e-mails and phone calls, my messages were not answered. What more can I do? — AnonymousA: Editors change plans sometimes and bump stories for more time-sensitive matter, so it’s not overly surprising that your article didn’t run in its originally scheduled month. But if they aren’t responding to your correspondence, there’s reason for concern. What you can do depends on the stipulations of the contract you signed. If the contract states you get paid upon acceptance, then you should have been paid by now. If the contract has a 25 percent kill fee and your story’s been killed, you should get that money. If you don’t receive a check and they won’t return your calls, seek legal counsel. If you didn’t sign a contract with the magazine, you’re unfortunately stuck with your hospital gown wide open in the back and little you can do about it. The best move is to politely e-mail the editor and withdraw your articles from consideration unless you receive a contract or notification about the articles by a specific date. This could lose you the job, but if you’re being ignored then there’s really nothing to lose. Then you can shop your article again. Or, hey, maybe the editor will begin responding. Brian A. Klems is the associate editor of Writer’s Digest magazine. Have a question for me? Feel free to post it in the comments section below or e-mail me at WritersDig@fwpubs.com with “Q&Q” in the subject line. Come back each Friday as I try to give you more insight into the writing life.
4/20/2007 11:13:37 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Friday, April 13, 2007
Because, Because, Because
Q: My grammar school teachers always told me that it was wrong to start a sentence with the word “because,” but I commonly see it in books today. What’s the rule?—Roger Allen A: Grammar teachers across the U.S., please don’t hate me, as I’m about to expose the awful truth you’ve been trying to hide for years: It’s not poor grammar to start a sentence with “because.” That’s right, there’s no rule or law in grammar books that denies you the right to start a sentence with this conjunction. A sentence such as, Because I needed money, I sold my body to science, is not only grammatically correct, it’s also more effective than if it were the other way around ( I sold my body to science because I needed the money). So why do teachers parade this nonexistent rule to our youth? They want to prevent the future scholars from writing in fragments, and kids have a tendency to write incomplete sentences like Because I can or Because he’s smelly. Instead of telling kids that they can’t start a sentence with “because,” it’d be more proper to make them complete their sentences. But I know how difficult it is to get kids to complete anything. Take care of yourself and your writing, Brian A. Klems Brian A. Klems is the associate editor of Writer’s Digest magazine. Have a question for me? Feel free to post it in the comments section below or e-mail me at WritersDig@fwpubs.com with “Q&Q” in the subject line. Come back each Friday as I try to give you more insight into the writing life. Grammar
4/13/2007 1:10:19 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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 Friday, April 06, 2007
When Burnout Sets In
I've been planning to start writing a novel that is burning inside me but my day job gets in the way—and it's not because of time. I get paid to write; I'm a science writer. I do a lot of writing for the Web about vaccines, infectious diseases and things like that, but no fiction. My problem is that when I sit at the computer at home to write a short story or my novel, I feel like I'm back at work--my mind is programmed for nonfiction science writing! I once read a column in WD where a writer advised to have a job that wouldn't steal your creativity. But changing jobs is not an option for me right now. Any suggestions?—Diego PinedaA: This question comes up a lot—especially in an office filled with editors—so you’re in good company. It can be incredibly hard to motivate yourself when your job and your extracurricular endeavors are nearly one in the same. In fact, I ran into this same problem near the end of last year. Ruling out bathroom breaks and snack machine trips, my workdays consist primarily of three things: writing, editing and reading. By the time I’d get home, I couldn’t look at another word. My mojo was gone and I was officially burnout. I finally snapped out of my funk, though, by remembering the fundamental reason I entered journalism: I love to read and write. It’s my passion. With that in mind, I started up a blog about becoming a father just for fun. Within one week I had squashed the burnout factor and relit the flame of the writer inside me. If you really want to write the story, you have to remember that you love writing, too. It’s not a chore; it’s a playground of opportunity. Once you can mentally overcome that hurdle, you’ll be fine. If you’re having trouble breaking your funk, check out these tips to get you get you going: 1. Try doing a weekly writing prompt. After “too busy” and “too lazy,” the top reason people stall is that they don’t have a place to start. Writing prompts give you a starting point, but allow you the complete freedom in taking any direction you want. Even small bursts of creativity can help push you in the right direction. (We offer free ones on our forum: Writer’s Digest Writing Prompts and Challenges) 2. Write an outline for your novel. This isn’t nearly as intense as writing the book, but it creates a roadmap to give you direction. You can jot down ideas on note cards, Post-Its, even napkins, which gives you the flexibility of writing anywhere in the house. Then, gather them all up and add structure. If you can dedicate one night a week to furthering your outline, you’ll be working on your novel in no time. 3. Try the challenge delivered by the folks at NaNoWriMo.org (National Novel Writing Month). Each November, this site encourages you to write 50,000 in 30 days. The site tracks your progress for you and lets you network with others for motivation. Of course, you can apply this principle to any month. And many writers find that a deadline such as this motivates them to get the job done. 4. Join a local writer’s group. People can be your greatest asset when writing. They can share ideas. They can motivate. They can also keep you focused on your overall goal—writing that novel. Take care of yourself and your writing, Brian A. KlemsHave a question for me? Feel free to post it in the comments section below or e-mail me at WritersDig@fwpubs.com with “Q&Q” in the subject line. Come back each Friday as I try to give you more insight into the writing life.
4/6/2007 4:04:16 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)
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