Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Hone vs. Home
Q: My niece is always misusing the word “hone” when she should be using “home.” I know the difference, but have a tough time explaining it to her. Can you explain this rule for us? —Carol M.

A: No problem at all, Carol. This is a mistake people make all the time. Often people misuse the word “hone” by placing it in sentences where it doesn’t belong, but it’s a simple confusion that can be cleared up by understanding its definition.

The verb “hone” means “to sharpen or make more acute,” as in honing a talent. Alfred honed his negotiation skills to buy a new car at a very reasonable price. I hone my abs by doing 100 sit-ups a day.

Generally, people drop it into sentences where they should use “home.” In verb form, “home” (as in “to home in on”) means “to move or be aimed toward a destination or target with great accuracy.” The leftfielder homed in on the fly ball. “Forget about the abs!” I said as I homed in on a mouth-watering candy bar.

As a simple rule of thumb, if you write the sentence and need the phrase “in on” after the verb, it’s most likely “home.” If not, you probably need to use “hone.”

Brian A. Klems is the online managing editor of Writer’s Digest magazine.

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Grammar
10/30/2007 9:00:25 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [3] 
 Tuesday, October 23, 2007
When's the Best Time to Query?
Q: When is the best time to query agents? I've heard different things, like winter is bad, summer is slow, but it's OK in the spring. Is this true?—Kristen Howe

A: Spring, summer, winter or fall—agents are continually looking for good manuscripts. You'll occasionally find one who says that she doesn't buy around the holidays or that she takes time off in June to cart the kids to Disneyworld, but that doesn't mean you can't send your query (or that you shouldn't). And it certainly doesn't mean it won't get a look.

"Agents are always working," says Nancy Love, agent at Nancy Love Literary Agency (member of the Association of Artists' Representatives).  "There are times when it's more difficult to sell books to publishers (summer because of vacations, around the Christmas and New Year's Holidays because everyone is shopping or away). But agents are always working."

In other words, don't let time restrict you. Picking the right moment to query isn't a seasonal issue, it's a personal issue. The best time to seek an agent is after you've polished off your novel (or your nonfiction outline and sample chapters) and done your homework on which agents best suit your work.

Brian A. Klems is the online managing editor of Writer’s Digest magazine.

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Publishing | Query Letters
10/23/2007 8:56:43 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [3] 
 Tuesday, October 16, 2007
What is a Kill Fee?
Q: I got a contract for a magazine story that I’m writing, and it makes reference to a "kill fee." What is a kill fee and why would a publisher and/or writer use one?—Frank

A: A kill fee what you get if your editor decides not to buy your story after all. For example, say you were contracted to write “Don’t Squash ‘em,” a story about spiders for the National Bug Lovers Magazine. The editor agreed to pay you $1,000 for the piece. You send in the completed work, and the editor reads it over but feels your depiction of the little critters is too far off base for the message of the magazine. He also determines that a revise or edit won’t fix the problems with the piece. You, on the other hand, have done a lot of the work and feel you deserve to get your check. This is where the kill fee comes into play.

Most contracts will state a percentage the editor will pay you if the story doesn’t run (Writer’s Digest pays 25% of the original agreed-upon amount). Once your story is officially killed, all rights to your piece revert back to you and you can try to sell it somewhere else. Maybe Insect Today will love your story.

There are any number of reasons why an article will get killed—it doesn’t fit the editorial focus of the magazine, something changes in the world and it negates the timeliness of the article, etc. Don’t take it personally. But go back and look at the original agreement and any comments the editor has supplied, and see what you can learn from the experience.

Brian A. Klems is the online managing editor of Writer’s Digest magazine.

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Business | Legal Questions | Publishing
10/16/2007 1:47:10 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [0] 
 Tuesday, October 09, 2007
Novel and Short Story Word Counts
Q. How long is the typical short story supposed to be? How about novellas and novels? Are there guidelines with regard to word count for a first-time novelist? —Molly Heyl

A. There are general guidelines for each literary category: Short stories range anywhere from 1,500 to 30,000 words; Novellas run from 30,000 to 50,000; Novels range from 55,000 to 300,000 words, but I wouldn’t recommend aiming for the high end, as books the length of War & Peace aren’t exactly the easiest to sell. 

Agent Lori Perkins of the L. Perkins Agency in New York says it’s much easier to market a first-time novelist’s book if the word count falls between 80,000 and 100,000 words, or roughly 300 double-spaced, typed pages—the average novel length.

“One-third of the novels that come into the agency are rejected because they’re too long or short,” Perkins says. “The cost greatly increases on books larger than 100,000 words, so agents and publishers are less likely to gamble on a manuscript the size of a dictionary.”

When you’re writing, though, don’t impose word limits on yourself. Let the story flow without interruption. Wait until you finish the first draft to go back and tighten it to a reasonable length. Save every scene you cut, though. It may lead you to another story.

Brian A. Klems is the online managing editor of Writer’s Digest magazine.

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Business | Marketing | Publishing
10/9/2007 12:48:36 PM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [2] 
Ensure vs. Insure
Q: Are “ensure” and “insure” interchangeable?—Anonymous

A: Some stylebooks say yes, and some say no. Are you any less confused? These two words are often used in place of each other, but WD’s style separates them. WD—and many other publications—uses “insure” only when referring to financial insurance policies. After signing a contract with a professional baseball team, Jack decided to insure his pitching arm for $1 million.

When the meaning is “to make certain,” WD sticks with “ensure.” It’s my job to ensure that you don’t misuse terms like these.

There are some newspapers and magazines, such as The New York Times and The New Yorker, that still use “insure” in both instances, but it’s fairly archaic to do so. Most publications differentiate the two.

Brian A. Klems is the online managing editor of Writer’s Digest magazine.

Have a question for me? Feel free to post it in the comments section below or e-mail me at WritersDig@fwpubs.com with “Q&Q” in the subject line. Come back each Tuesday as I try to give you more insight into the writing life.



Grammar
10/9/2007 11:15:46 AM (Eastern Daylight Time, UTC-04:00)  #  Comments [1]