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    Sijo: Poetic Form

    Categories: Poetic Forms, Robert Lee Brewer's Poetic Asides Blog, What's New.

    While the sijo poetic form is new to Poetic Asides, it is actually older than haiku. This Korean poetic form is only three lines long, but a lot is packed into those three lines. Here’s a quick rundown:

    • 3 lines in length, averaging 14-16 syllables per line (for a poem total of 44-46 syllables).
    • Line 1 introduces the situation or theme of the poem.
    • Line 2 develops the theme with more detail or a “turn” in argument.
    • Line 3 presents a “twist” and conclusion.

    That’s a quick overview, but it can get a lot more involved. Here are some more things to consider:

    • Sijo are meant to be songs, so this form is more lyrical.
    • Poems can be profound, humorous, metaphysical, and personal.
    • Each line should have a pause (or break) somewhere in the middle.
    • First half of the final line employs a “twist” of meaning, sound, or another poetic device.

    With me so far? Sijo are lyrical and meant to be sung, so even the lines have a traditional syllable break:

    • Line 1: 3-4-4-4
    • Line 2: 3-4-4-4
    • Line 3: 3-5-4-3

    This last part is a good goal to aspire achieving, but it’s more flexible than the overall syllable count per line and poem. Whew!

    Here’s an example sijo that I wrote:

    “Orbit”

    I tell her we’re always alone, but she says we’re together
    the same as the moon spins with the earth around the sun.
    If they weren’t together, she tells me, we would not be alive.

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    70 Responses to Sijo: Poetic Form

    1. artsywriter80 says:

      ANGEL
      I feel so empty and alone without her by my side
      Then I know anytime I look up into the sky
      She will always be there to guide me throughout each day and night.

    2. artsywriter80 says:

      FIRST TIME
      So much passion inside that I can barely catch my breath
      The warmth of his touch flows throughout my entire body
      If this is what love feels like I never want it to stop.

    3. artsywriter80 says:

      MIRROR
      As I see my reflection staring straight back at me
      I can’t help but feel shame and contempt for the person I see
      So stop listening to what others say for it is now a brand new day.

    4. Charm

      He always held that lucky buckeye in his right front pocket
      Passed down from his grand father to his father and then to him.
      He wondered, as he fingered it, whether the luck was good or bad.

    5. bjzeimer says:

      Earth Sijo

      How lovely, this planet, its surface shadowed, with forest green
      and blue surround, the big harvest moon, the red glow of a setting sun.
      For of this kind, who would think, that Earth came, from a big bang?

    6. bjzeimer says:

      Earth Sijo

      How lovely this planet, its surface shadowed with forest green
      and blue surround, the harvest moon, the red glow of a setting sun.
      For of this kind who would think, that Earth came from a big bang?

    7. cmariee says:

      Looking up

      Remembered lies on broken words of glass that cut through me
      Through naïve and youthful days you and your words just walked away
      You left me, but our pain is not the real story. And I’m sorry.

    8. Clae says:

      I planned to write comments on each piece I enjoyed but soon
      it became clear that would take all year Instead I wrote these lines
      to say all sijo seen today are clearly by Master Poets

    9. phenomenon says:

      The night sky…………

      Lying here looking at the natural beauty around me
      The stars in all its glory and the moon shining bright
      Realizing with a jolt that my friends have thrown me outside the tent

    10. Domino says:

      I lie here; grass is my bed. I’ve chosen this place to stargaze.
      Moon dark sky, stars brightly blaze; undimmed by much save these few tears.
      I will stay, perhaps, for the night. I can’t leave your grave unmourned.

      Diana Terrill Clark

    11. MayamotoWaya says:

      I can see the change in your eyes, as you gaze towards the skies
      In parallel the universe you see – won’t be itself again
      When revolution is nature, how could I resent your fresh stare?

    12. Af10ski says:

      Lie:

      Tell a Lie, but tell it Flat
      Truth in Degrees is He’ll bent
      It’s all the Same to Lie

    13. writinglife16 says:

      Her mother dragged the kindergarten pictures out to show.
      Her date froze as he looked at her in a brown, onesie with cap.
      She fell in love when he said, “I will buy you chocolates daily.”

    14. Tracy Davidson says:

      Cocktails

      For our twins sixteenth birthday, we serve non-alcoholic cocktails,
      complete with pink umbrellas, and novelty shaped ice cubes.
      My daughter finds a penis in her virgin ‘Sex on the Beach’.

    15. PowerUnit says:

      Upon us heap lots of pain for without it we will not gain
      Open doors but blind our eyes make us look for stars in the skies
      Beat our will with your biggest stick but we all know your little trick

    16. BezBawni says:

      VESPERTINE MELANCHOLY

      When night is drawing closer, moving faster than light goes off,
      then hearts are growing heavy, getting lonely, then thoughts are dark.
      We’re seven billion, living in packs, howling at the moon.

    17. cholder says:

      I chose the 6-line style!

      Murder at Chain of Rocks Bridge

      Chain of Rocks your secrets keep
      what remains beneath buried deep.
      My heart bleeds forsaken one;
      justice serves no retribution.
      The mighty Mississippi weeps
      over her watery grave.

    18. cholder says:

      I chose the 6-line style!

      Murder at Chain of Rocks Bridge

      Chain of Rocks your secrets keep
      what remains beneath buried deep.
      My heart bleeds forsaken one;
      justice serves no retribution.
      The mighty Mississippi weeps
      over her watery grave.

    19. JRSimmang says:

      WHEN WE SPEAK, WE SPEAK HEAT

      The old muse and I, expectedly (always), have been in
      deliberations. Once we started yelling at each other
      we had to take separate walks. Why does she challenge us so?

      -JR Simmang, in quiet anticipation of the next PA Challenge

    20. RJ Clarken says:

      Evening Commute

      Silhouette: vermillion sky, India-inked wintery limbs…
      An unknown artist must have magic in his ancient pen nibs
      Sitting in the twilight traffic: through my windshield, I trace the strokes.

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    21. swatchcat says:

      Screaming

      I’m screaming, spinning through the day, trying to find my way
      Screaming, let me go away, I’m painted black all filled with decay
      What would I do if it wasn’t for you, you leave me screaming

    22. “The gallery”

      Invite me to your palette. Your life without dwelling or time.
      Lazy stars paint in discord like hieroglyphs spilling over.
      You are art—a spring of intrigue and I am your artisan.

    23. PressOn says:

      FRUSTRATION

      There it is again. “You are posting comments too quickly.
      Slow down.” This happens repeatedly, on and on and on.
      I haven’t felt this way since I tried swimming in pudding.

    24. Amy says:

      Dreaming of Sleep

      Your breath breaks on the cotton pillowcase, as gentle waves.
      I long for the peace that wraps you in dreams, contentedly,
      but settle, instead, between inked pages, where dreams content me.

    25. David says:

      Freefall

      By David De Jong

      Leaves are chanting, gathering, drawing their sabers with sharpened edge
      Charging forward, in clustered columns, with battle cries of revolt
      Angry winds shake their timbered fist, their members refusing retreat

    26. Ann M says:

      The rain, falling on ice and snow, bares frozen mid-winter soil.
      The orchid, bowing over the windowsill, is a light in the room.
      If I have to write today, which scene is going to be my muse?

    27. Amy says:

      Moonlight

      If I could hold the moon upon my face, let the light trace
      exposed planes and hidden hollows, would your hand follow in its
      quest? You whisper your assent, or perhaps it’s just the breeze.

    28. elishevasmom says:

      Sucker Punched

      My dad has cancer—maybe two months to live. I knew he’s been sick.
      I thought I was ready for whatever the news would be.
      But that kind of ready? There is no such thing.

      Ellen Evans 1.17.14
      a “sijo” for PA

    29. Misky says:

      Music fills my last dream before I drift awake.
      Each note is a rainstorm, a maelstrom in its volume.
      I turn, I wake, as music becomes a traffic report.

    30. PressOn says:

      THE END OF THE HUNT

      As a tinge of orange flows along the morning horizon
      and the color promises the coming of another day,
      owl takes her final silent flight; day breaks with a final scream.

    31. bclay says:

      A Cold Night

      There you are, reading my books, Neruda and Joseph Campbell,
      in poems, of Bukowski, Dickinson and red wheelbarrows -
      you find me, in meter and verse; will you ever read my own?

    32. PowerUnit says:

      Father said you will succeed if you work hard and plow ahead
      Mother said he did not know the modern world from his own past
      Be yourself, do what you should do according to your secret dreams

    33. priyajane says:

      Misty clouds,sleepily, hover in the warm in-betweens
      of the hills, – as I gather and separate my drifting thoughts
      with the scrawny timber, half awake, — hanging on to love and ache

    34. IN HONOR OF MY DAUGHTERS

      In the winter of our years we take pride in knowing
      the tree of life lives on in your development and growth,
      full of knowledge and purpose to grow and prosper.

    35. lionetravail says:

      Kittens seem, to me, to be a form of meditation.
      Hours pass in soft repose as gentle purrs massage like “oms”,
      And random, sleepy thoughts crystallize into “chakra and awwww”.

    36. First Date

      We had every reason to hail a cab — rain, uneven
      concrete, expectations of a kiss in the warm dark back –
      instead you flexed your fingers against my palm. We glistened like dreams.

    37. Richard Fenwick says:

      The old man and I cut the pine boughs in silence
      Red-brown below but the color of moss high above
      Where the angry old songbird trills a mysterious dirge.

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